Oh, she's bad.

Well, this is interesting. I can tell that CountryGirl!Lois is going to be fascinating - and very amusing - to watch.

Loved the banter - had to

LabRat

lol, Jo, this is adorable! Love the banter, and their sexy teasing relationship, and their mutual uncertainty about it... can't wait for part two!

PJ

Jocelyn

A great start!
Your characterizations are spot on.

I'm enjoying this immensely and look forward to reading the next part.

Tricia

Very cute! More soon. Laura

Hi,

Great piece.

MAF

Hi all! Thank you for the generally good feedback I've gotten for this story. I'd like to address the epilogue issue .

I included this in the story, primarily because I felt the story was too Waffy for my tastes. Yes, in retrospect, it did ruin the story, and should I decide to submit it to the archive, I'll remove it. Generally speaking, I wasn't thrilled with the outcome of this story: it didn't please me, but I posted it anyway. Meh, it happens. But I apologize to anyone who felt that the epilogue was too much, unnecessary, or just plain ruined the story. I'll try better next time .

Thanks again guys, for your readership