That was a gorgeous little vignette, I love the way you pen Lois' internal dialogue.
You've captured a wonderful sense of season 1, top banana Lois -- at the pre-realisation of feelings for Clark, but recognition that the seed of something is there stage -- in such a short but insightful (and fun!) piece of writing... although I echo the above sentiments, it seems to be begging for continuation, I would love to see this Lois again...
pretty please