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FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54865 08/19/08 06:25 PM
Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 92 Florida T There Is No Spoon OP Freelance Reporter
OP There Is No Spoon Freelance Reporter T Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 92 Florida	Very good story. To bad it is only a one-shot. I could see Lois patiently observing Clark or at least try to get her answers. It definitely would be a fun read. Or maybe do a sequel????

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54866 08/19/08 07:37 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Quote The End delightful tale but it needs so much more! Framework4

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54867 08/19/08 11:12 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland Jenni Debb Columnist
Jenni Debb Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland	Hi Nan, Such a lovely little insert for this episode. It could have so easily happened that way. It was a delight to read. Yours Jenni

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54868 08/19/08 11:24 PM
Joined: May 2007 Posts: 86 the dark side of the moon anagram Freelance Reporter
anagram Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2007 Posts: 86 the dark side of the moon	That was a gorgeous little vignette, I love the way you pen Lois' internal dialogue. You've captured a wonderful sense of season 1, top banana Lois -- at the pre-realisation of feelings for Clark, but recognition that the seed of something is there stage -- in such a short but insightful (and fun!) piece of writing... although I echo the above sentiments, it seems to be begging for continuation, I would love to see this Lois again... pretty please All right... all right... but apart from better sanitation and medicine and education and irrigation and public health and roads and a freshwater system and baths and public order... what have the Romans done for us?

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54869 08/20/08 12:32 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida cp33 Columnist
cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	Nice little tale. Lois was so close to discovering a secret she doesn't even know exsists.

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54870 08/20/08 10:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28	Wonderful little vignette, Nan. Loved the WaFF. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54871 08/20/08 12:52 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip Features Writer
anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	This was great, but I agree with everyone else - I'd love to see more of this.

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54872 08/20/08 03:33 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 273 Hong Kong (ex-pat New Zealande... Lisamaree, the Evil Kiwi Hack from Nowheresville
Lisamaree, the Evil Kiwi Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 273 Hong Kong (ex-pat New Zealande...	That was fantastic.... but.... but... but..... it needs more.... I'd love to see how you make Lois watch Clark for the 'signs'... whether Clark catches on, and eventually who gives up their knowledge (or secret) first... Please write more... pretty please... with lots of sugar on top???? "He's my best friend, best of all best friends Do you have a best friend too It tickles in my tummy He's so Yummy Yummy Hey you should get a best friend too" - Toy Box

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54873 08/20/08 03:55 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Loved it Nan but does it have to be the end. It seems more like chapter one of a good long fic. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Feathers: 1/1 #54874 08/20/08 04:52 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Is it "The End"??? Don't worry guys, this is Nan Smith we're talking about She's the sequel/series queen! Nan, this was delightful. And I would definitely enjoy seeing this develop. PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

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