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Very cute.

I loved the Lane genetics coming into play.

And the humour was hysterical.
Will there be a follow up? wink


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Thast was delightful! I really liked th premise and you did an excellent job on the characters.

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Great last line!! It had me rotflol !!


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Thanks for this piece, Queen of the capes. You made my afternoon! This was really hilarious!


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Love this!!!

Need... well, you know what fic I need to see wink .

Really loved the end!!
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Funny! rotflol

When I first saw the title, I thought of the old W. C. Fields movie (one of his last, if not his last) entitled "Never Give A Sucker An Even Break." According to some accounts, Fields hated the title because he was sure it would be shortened on theater marquees to "Sucker" with his name under it.

So my first impression of the title was "Never Give Your In-Laws An Even Break," even though the real title was much better. And Lucy's reactions were pretty much in character - as much as we actually know of Lucy's character - so a little case of Superman hero worship in Lucy isn't out of the question. Of course she's cool with her sister! They grew up together, so she knows how whacked-out Lois can be. I'd like to see Lucy and Ellen talking about "The Secret" without letting anyone else know about it. I'd be more concerned that Ellen would blurt it out than Lucy.

Nice little tale. When will you post the next one? (Can't get away with giving us just a little taste of your twisted sense of humor. We need more! More! More!)


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Cute and funny. clap

I liked the "here we go again" ending.

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Mary, that was hilarious. What a day for LnC rotflol

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This was very cute. Although, you'd think Lois and Clark would not make the mistake of kissing when he's in the suit twice in one day. But I guess when you're in love...

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I think that changing the locks at this point would be moot ...

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That was just adorable! Loved the whole thing! Laura


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Lois had something in her teeth...ok.


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*giggles* this was priceless!! Thank you for the great read!


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Hi,

LOl. Great little story. Loved the punch line! laugh

Yours Jenni

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