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Again, lemme know what you think smile


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Wow, how did I miss the first part? Very interesting premise so far. It neatly covers all of the secrecy in Lex's background.. and his older son. smirk Can't wait to see where this goes!


"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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Fascinating - I'm really enjoying this story so far. Including Lex with various historical (and evil) events was clever and I'm enjoying this unique view on Lex's children. Poor Jaxon - the little chimp just can't catch a break, can he?

I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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ok, how about...

Tokra Takeover
or
Lexus Immortus, NOT!
or
Lex Explained.


Loving this story!!! Nicely seamless in execution.


James


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shock jawdrop thud

J

P.S. does that explain I wasn't expecting that? wink


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Well. eek I did not see that coming.

Title suggestion -- I haven't any clear idea of where you're going from here, so that makes it tough, but you could go with the self-explanatory "Lois & Clark vs. the Goa'uld." It's not punny or clever but it might get the idea over in an efficient way. smile And it'd acronymize nicely -- L&C v. G laugh

Or if you make it "Superman vs. the Goa'uld" that'd be even easier: SvG

Are we going to see SG-1 at any point?

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

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Thanks guys for all your very kind comments - I really appreciate them smile

Karen : Glad you think it explains so much - I thought so too wave lol

Pam: Glad you are enjoying, and it just might come to Acronym-ity <g> And I am still debating - but I don't think so - that fourth wall is a bleeding hard one to cross with any dignity. Might have them in a silly epilogue or shortie sequel tho.


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