Again, lemme know what you think

Wow, how did I miss the first part? Very interesting premise so far. It neatly covers all of the secrecy in Lex's background.. and his older son. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Fascinating - I'm really enjoying this story so far. Including Lex with various historical (and evil) events was clever and I'm enjoying this unique view on Lex's children. Poor Jaxon - the little chimp just can't catch a break, can he?

I'm looking forward to the next installment.
BJ

ok, how about...

Tokra Takeover
or
Lexus Immortus, NOT!
or
Lex Explained.


Loving this story!!! Nicely seamless in execution.


James

J

P.S. does that explain I wasn't expecting that?

Well. I did not see that coming.

Title suggestion -- I haven't any clear idea of where you're going from here, so that makes it tough, but you could go with the self-explanatory "Lois & Clark vs. the Goa'uld." It's not punny or clever but it might get the idea over in an efficient way. And it'd acronymize nicely -- L&C v. G

Or if you make it "Superman vs. the Goa'uld" that'd be even easier: SvG

Are we going to see SG-1 at any point?

PJ

Thanks guys for all your very kind comments - I really appreciate them

Karen : Glad you think it explains so much - I thought so too

Pam: Glad you are enjoying, and it just might come to Acronym-ity <g> And I am still debating - but I don't think so - that fourth wall is a bleeding hard one to cross with any dignity. Might have them in a silly epilogue or shortie sequel tho.