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Thanks, LoisLaneWannaBe, this was really sweet!  It's always nice to see Lois and Clark get a chance to talk about things that were never discussed on screen. Your descriptions are great. More later! claire 
"Perfectionism spells paralysis." - Winston Churchill
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Cute little vignette. I think Clark better be careful, you know what rain does to his hair... (the slicked back look?) And then there's the glasses getting all full of water spots so Lois will feel compelled to take them off...Nah, could never happen. Tank (who wonders why Martha and Jonathan are just sitting out there in the truck, won't they miss their party?  )
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Awwww, very cute  - Alicia
Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve
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Oh noo no no! You just can't end that there! Come on please, pretty please write more! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Yes there could definately be another chapter. Maybe they need to visit the barn
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this was very sweet and cute
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It's pouring here and reading your nice story while the thunder and rain are outside was so nice.
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A lovely vignette! Lois and Clark's conversation is great. Thanks for sharing this sweet story. Tricia 
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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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That was very sweet and lovely. And I agree with the others, you should really write more, more to this vignette wouldn't hurt at all. Saskia
I tawt I taw a puddy cat!
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Great job LL! Ditto LabRat on the atmosphere and setting. You were able to stay in the timeline, which is hard to do sometimes (esp for me!  ). Keep writing!!!! ~sunkist
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Hi, Beautiful story.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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