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FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40749 03/20/07 04:39 PM
Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA DSDragon OP Top Banana
OP DSDragon Top Banana Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA	Yay! Something I said got somebody to post a story! You turn phrases pretty darn well yourself. I'm not in the habit of quoting from fics as I read them though, so I don't really have any specific examples. But this was really good. "It could use a polish," (just minor glitches--probably just typos) as Perry would say, but it's still really good. "You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40750 03/20/07 04:42 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	That was beautiful. Poignant. Bittersweet. So glad you decided to share. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40751 03/21/07 12:00 AM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 185 Baltimore MD mervoparkite Hack from Nowheresville
mervoparkite Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 185 Baltimore MD	Very nicely done. You really have a way with illlustrating emotions. I'm glad you posted this! Johnny was a chemist, Now Johnny is no more, For what he thought was H two O Was really H two S O four. --Lab safety limrick--

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40752 03/21/07 12:39 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	That was lovely, Laura. lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40753 03/21/07 01:13 AM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 613 VA minimunch3 Columnist
minimunch3 Columnist Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 613 VA	Beautiful and so very sad! You have a talent for writing their emotions so well. Thanks for posting! ~Kristen Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point. Rachel: A moo point? Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo." Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40754 03/21/07 02:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 50 S silm Freelance Reporter
silm Freelance Reporter S Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 50	WOW! So well done.Very beautiful and sweet... Thanks Sil

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40755 03/21/07 06:17 AM
Joined: May 2004 Posts: 544 Oregon symbolicangel Columnist
symbolicangel Columnist Joined: May 2004 Posts: 544 Oregon	That was so beautiful. You have a way with words. I'll have to go check out that song now. Silence is golden. Duct tape is silver. ~Saw it on a T-Shirt.

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40756 03/21/07 11:21 AM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,006 Laura S Top Banana
Laura S Top Banana Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,006	Hey I just had a pretty all around lousy day, so these comments mean double-y as much to me. Thanks for all the kind words! Darcy-- I see what you mean. I should look into asking around for a beta... Elisabeth-- Thanks for the encouragement! mervoparkite-- I'm glad YOU'RE glad I posted it! I wasn't going to, as I said, because I was pretty sure someone else had already done the scene (and probably done it better! lol) but I decided to bite the bullet and post. MrsMoseley-- Thanks for the continuous reviewing of all my stuff! I really appreciate it. Kristin-- I was nervous about how their emotions came across also, so thanks for the comments! Sil-- Glad you enjoyed it. Symbolicangel-- Thanks for reading! And hopefully you liked the song. I loved it. Thanks to CapeFetish for the awesome icon.

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40757 03/21/07 11:28 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,989 Likes: 11 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 2,989 Likes: 11 Florida	Beautiful! ~•~

Re: FDK: Awake Part 1/1 #40758 03/22/07 06:04 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 33 Alayna22 Blogger
Alayna22 Blogger Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 33	Aw, that was beautiful! So incredibly sad though...but you captured them both beautifully. Sniff I can totally see them doing this... Hmm, I'm sorry I'm not very articulate. Thank you so much for putting this up! I need to listen to that song now. I hope to read more from you in the future. (LOL, perhaps the quote from Darcy in the beginning will also give me the guts to post part of the fic I'm working on...)

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