Yay! Something I said got somebody to post a story!

You turn phrases pretty darn well yourself. I'm not in the habit of quoting from fics as I read them though, so I don't really have any specific examples. But this was really good. "It could use a polish," (just minor glitches--probably just typos) as Perry would say, but it's still really good.

That was beautiful. Poignant. Bittersweet. So glad you decided to share.

Elisabeth

Very nicely done. You really have a way with illlustrating emotions.

I'm glad you posted this!

That was lovely, Laura.

Beautiful and so very sad! You have a talent for writing their emotions so well. Thanks for posting!

~Kristen

WOW! So well done.Very beautiful and sweet...
Thanks
Sil

That was so beautiful. You have a way with words. I'll have to go check out that song now.

Hey I just had a pretty all around lousy day, so these comments mean double-y as much to me. Thanks for all the kind words!

Darcy-- I see what you mean. I should look into asking around for a beta...

Elisabeth-- Thanks for the encouragement!

mervoparkite-- I'm glad YOU'RE glad I posted it! I wasn't going to, as I said, because I was pretty sure someone else had already done the scene (and probably done it better! lol) but I decided to bite the bullet and post.

MrsMoseley-- Thanks for the continuous reviewing of all my stuff! I really appreciate it.

Kristin-- I was nervous about how their emotions came across also, so thanks for the comments!

Sil-- Glad you enjoyed it.

Symbolicangel-- Thanks for reading! And hopefully you liked the song. I loved it.

Beautiful!

Aw, that was beautiful! So incredibly sad though...but you captured them both beautifully. *Sniff* I can totally see them doing this... Hmm, I'm sorry I'm not very articulate.

Thank you so much for putting this up! I need to listen to that song now. I hope to read more from you in the future.

(LOL, perhaps the quote from Darcy in the beginning will also give me the guts to post part of the fic I'm working on...)