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FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38109 01/28/07 05:52 PM
Joined: Nov 2006 Posts: 99 Seattle, Washington V vsp OP Freelance Reporter
OP vsp Freelance Reporter V Joined: Nov 2006 Posts: 99 Seattle, Washington	Haha, this is really funny so far. I'm enjoying it anyways. I especially like Superman's reaction to the clothes and the name "Superman". I always wished they would do more with that in the TV show - I mean seriously, Clark has to have serious issues to be able to dress like that. I guess they kind of did something in that one episode where alt-Clark worries about looking stupid in the suit, but they could have done so much more.

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38110 01/28/07 06:05 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	Quote But, no... seems Clark and Superman were better friends than either one of them had ever let on. Oh, darn. You went for option number two. Ah, well, I expected it. Quote No, she would have noticed that. <snort> Quote the red underwear that had... belt loops? Still loving it, Sara! lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38111 01/28/07 06:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Oh, this is such a great start! I'm just a little too brain dead to say anything else right now, but I love Clark's confusion, Lois jumping to all those conclusions about Clark and Superman hanging out...keep it up! JD "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38112 01/28/07 10:24 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	It has to sink in at some point maybe when she tries to drag him into bed? Patrick Framework4

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38113 01/29/07 02:14 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38114 01/29/07 02:35 AM
Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 402 South Carolina, USA C Caroline Beat Reporter
Caroline Beat Reporter C Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 402 South Carolina, USA	Quote He shook his head. "This isn't a suit. This is... a Halloween costume." Quote That was something he really wanted to ask her about. As soon as she finished remodeling the kitchen. No! Ask now! Ask now! Not in the next part... now! And "remodeling the kitchen" slayed me. Hee! Quote "Did you say fly?" Poor Clark. So adorable in his confusion. Still loving it, Sara. Keep 'em coming! Caroline

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38115 01/29/07 03:03 AM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	OMG! Clark.. erm Superman's reaction towards his suit is hilarious Lois' matter-of-fact observations about Superman's lifestyle and his alarming bewilderment... superb Also the photo (Clark's clue) and his towel-clad chest(Lois' clue) .. uhoh If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38116 01/29/07 04:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Ooh, somebody's gonna be kicking herself later for missing all those clues... <g> There's none so blind as those who will not see, eh? And I love that Clark immediately recognizes himself in the picture and that it tells him there's some serious emotion involved in there somewhere even if it's not immediately obvious. Wonder if he'll get up the nerve to ask Lois about it? PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38117 01/29/07 03:11 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	I agree with Lisa! Darn! You went for option #2 and made Lois jump to the brain-dead conclusion that Clark is just storing Superman's suits in his apartment!!! groan Ann

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38118 01/29/07 03:18 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA Psychofurball Columnist
Psychofurball Columnist Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA	LOL!!!!!! I love this part of the story. Always cracks me up. Keep it up, Sara! Rach Me: what are you looking at Snatches pic OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?! Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate! Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate! Sara: LMAO the chocolate isn't smeared in chocolate! Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate Sara: ROTFLMAO

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38119 01/29/07 03:58 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	I love the way you're bringing them together a little bit at a time, and still maintaining a reasonable amount of misunderstanding on both sides. I think Lois will kick herself in the head when she finally does figure it out. Of course, because she's so very good at martial arts, she'll give herself amnesia, and then you'll have your next story! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 #38120 01/31/07 11:51 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,084 Likes: 39 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,084 Likes: 39 Albuquerque, NM	Ouf! Talk about a loaded schedule... classes, work, tutoring, homework and sometimes sleep! Sorry, guys! I really meant to post this next part sooner. And I really should be in bed right now... So, I'm not going to respond to individual feedback except to say: Quote And I love that Clark immediately recognizes himself in the picture and that it tells him there's some serious emotion involved in there somewhere even if it's not immediately obvious. Wonder if he'll get up the nerve to ask Lois about it? Pam... for the Lois kicking herself in the head and giving herself amnesia comment. Thank you, thank you everyone! I've already read through your comments more times than I should admit to! And now... part 3! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 vsp #255378 06/15/14 03:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28	Quote Her jaw dropped and all the air disappeared from her lungs. She... He... Clark that... that... fink! She’s figured out that Clark’s sleeping with Superman! Quote This was why he got all those exclusive Superman interviews! Oh, that just wasn't fair. She would have gladly offered up closet space for an interview or two. Or her bed? CLARK: No, she doesn’t share her bed. LOIS: I’ll make an exception for Superman. Quote Clark had a lot of explaining to do as soon as she found him. They were partners, for crying out loud! He couldn't have mentioned this? CLARK: It’s called keeping a secret. LOIS: Or treason. Quote Did they talk about her? Complain about her pigheadedness and her unrelenting infatuation? SUPERMAN: You wouldn’t be the stunt she pulled today. She was actually stuck to the side of a skyscraper when I got to her. Quote And Superman... well, he was lucky he had no memory at the moment. Right. As if she’d ever bet mad at him when he’s naked in front of her. Quote It wasn't like she'd be letting him out anyway, not when he didn't even know who he was. Yeah…crooks might take advantage of him… Quote . And, wow, Lois had three of them! She must be quite the journalist. Or walk over dead bodies to get them. Quote Oh. Wow. It was him. And her. A candid photo, it appeared, taken in what looked to be a newsroom. Maybe he should not mention that one to Lois. Quote His eyes in the photograph... Well, he wasn't sure he quite believed what he was seeing there. Surely, it couldn't be. Lois would have mentioned something if they'd been... were... lov--really close friends. He’s figured out that they’re friends with benefits! Is he going to kiss her when she gets home? Quote "I'm back, and I actually managed to find one of your su--" She stopped mid-sentence and mid-stride. Ooooh! Towel-effect! Quote He gestured down to the bag hanging from her arm. Clothes would be nice right now. Really nice. SUPERMAN (some minutes later): That? I can’t wear that! Quote I didn't know that before, but you have a closet and everything. Yeah…well…he’s not come out of the closet yet. Quote Not to mention her eyes kept wandering over his chest and... lower. Quote Well, this costume thing couldn't be that bad, right? At least it would cover more of him. Yes. ‘Cover’ Quote Red spandex briefs. "You... uh... you wear them on the outside." No. No way. Quote Only... the tight-fitting spandex didn't leave much to the imagination. At all. He gave the discarded towel a longing look, Quote , wondering if Lois would look at him funny if he came out with the cape wrapped around him, covering his front. Quote She could... say she forgot something from her room and, oops, didn't realize he'd been... No, that was a lame excuse. Then again, the man didn't have a memory. For all he knew, they were involved. /heads over yonder/ Quote Because any minute now, Superman was going to come walking out her bedroom door and ask her-- "So, you said something about dinner?" Oh boy. Quote ... to feed him. Dang. LOIS: Quote Maybe she'd decided to cook instead? Quote He didn't want her to go to any more trouble for him than she had already, especially because, now that he thought about it, he didn't feel all that hungry. He’s remembering something! LOIS: Quote I was trying to find the menu for this place Clark always gets food from, but I guess I don't h--" Quote "Did you say fly?" Oh, so much fun! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 2/4 vsp #255771 06/29/14 05:05 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,084 Likes: 39 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,084 Likes: 39 Albuquerque, NM	Hee hee! Loved the reactions, Michael! Thanks for the feedback! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

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