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FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? #283980 03/09/19 11:01 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl OP Features Writer
OP Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	I hope you liked this different beginning for Clark (and Lois) ( Prologue ) Last edited by Blueowl; 04/07/19 08:30 PM.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #283983 03/10/19 10:11 AM
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BlindPassenger Beat Reporter B Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 323 Likes: 3 Germany	Sounds like an interesting premise for A plot. I remember one or two with Lois as a PI (one by Tank and another "Hearts Devided/United" by Pam Jernigan). And also one where Clark is a police detective (don't remember the title, was one of Terry Leatherwoods). But Clark as an investigator - interesting idea and so far I know it's a new one. Normally I don't read unfinished stories (that's so frustrating :-). So keep on with this, I'm sure I will enjoy it! Up, up and away - to the next fanfic.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #283990 03/10/19 11:01 AM
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LadyTpower Beat Reporter L Joined: Oct 2018 Posts: 438 Belgium	This is a nice and interesting start. I hope to read more soon * once a Lois and Clark fan, always a Lois and Clark fan *

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? BlindPassenger #284000 03/10/19 09:13 PM
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OP Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	Thanks. I know I've read at least one of those, though it was a long time ago. And I understand you not wanting to start a WIP fic. Incomplete works are just sad. Anyway, I am over half way through writing the fic. I imagine it'll be 10-12 chapters; I'm working on ch. 7 right now

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? LadyTpower #284001 03/10/19 09:17 PM
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OP Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	Thanks To help me keep ahead in my writing, I'll probably post once a week.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #284005 03/10/19 11:14 PM
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Endelda Beat Reporter Joined: Nov 2017 Posts: 384 Texas	Wow, I love this!! PI Clark with a place to belong and a mission! I'm also liking that he hasn't come out as Superman yet, I can't wait to see where this goes! "HUMANS NEED FANTASY TO BE HUMAN. TO BE THE PLACE WHERE THE FALLING ANGEL MEETS THE RISING APE." -Terry Pratchett, Hogfather

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #284014 03/11/19 12:12 PM
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Christina Top Banana C Joined: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,357 Cape Girardeau	You pulled me out of my lurker-dom! I like how it's using Clark as military and him primarily as a PI. I once read a fanfic that sort of had a storyline where a MIB-like force considered Clark one of the good guys and had him under their protection and Trask was one of their (secondary) rogues. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Newcomb because of this. CLARK: No. I'm just worried I'm a jinx. JONATHAN: A jinx? CLARK: Yeah. Let's face it, ever since she's known me, Lois's been kidnapped, frozen, pushed off buildings, almost stabbed, poisoned, buried alive and who knows what else, and it's all because of me. -"Contact" (You're not her jinx, you're her blessing.)

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #284015 03/11/19 02:43 PM
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cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Welcome as a new author! Great start to your story with an intriguing premise. Last edited by cuidadora; 03/11/19 03:52 PM. Reason: icon error Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #284019 03/11/19 09:49 PM
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OP Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	Endelda - Thanks I'm trying a different route where Clark has more experience and confidence when he moves to Metropolis than he had in the show. I also hope the military will provide an alternative perspective to enable him to approach certain things differently.... Christina - Glad I was able to pull you from your lurking :P. I loved Newcomb's brief appearance in the show. He'll definitely play a bigger part in this story. cuidadora - Thanks, I hope you like what's to come ^_^

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Blueowl #297627 09/27/23 12:13 PM
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Shallowford Columnist S Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 732 Likes: 1 Michigan's thumb	I had a few minutes at lunch and had a chance to start your story. I really enjoyed the premise and will definitely be reading on. Thanks!! Shallowford

Re: FDK: Investigate - Prologue/? Shallowford #297628 09/27/23 03:07 PM
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OP Blueowl Features Writer Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 996 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	Originally Posted by Shallowford I had a few minutes at lunch and had a chance to start your story. I really enjoyed the premise and will definitely be reading on. Thanks!! Thanks. I'm currently working on Act 6 ^_^ Hope you continue to enjoy.

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