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*happy sigh* Just lovely. There's really nothing like a brand new baby (especially when they're content and quiet  ), is there?  Some wonderful lines, like this one His love for Lois had actually outgrown its living arrangements. Which was then surpassed by Maybe love was an unknown, universal superpower. Really, really nice. 
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
- Under the Tuscan Sun
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Wow, that was fantastic! Sweet and cute and... so very nice. Had me in awe, and in aww. (Meaning I was in awe, and couldn't say anything but 'aww!' for a good five minutes! <g>) Really great. Loved the way you phrased the birth... ushering them into parenthood... just perfect.
'I just kind of died for you;
You just kind of stared at me'
- Aurora, Foo Fighters
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Marcy, why do I have so much RL right now? I don't have time to write any proper feedback for this story. But I adore it. I love it when Clark and Lois's love is confirmed and taking shape in the form of a child. I like the stories better the younger the children are, and I get less and less interested the older the children are, and the more they start taking over the story. So, Next Generation stories, focusing on grown-up kids... no, not for me. But this... oh, so lovely. You make me feel how Clark is so full of love that he is just overflowing with it, and the outpouring of love from his heart is indeed outgrowing his living arrangements. I so loved that expression, and I just generally, totally loved the sweet WAFFiness of this. Thank you, thank you so much for this, Marcy. I love it!  Ann
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Yeah, what they said This was beautiful. PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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OMG, this is so sweet. I wish every man were like Clark...and my husband. 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Awwww thats so sweet here a kiss for the baby  great story by the way
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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Merriwether
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I've never been with a fresh baby - but I felt his love and aw for the baby. That was so sweet and touching.
Thanks!
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Very sweet story. I picture the scene and Clark's love for his family vividly.
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Oh, Marcy! This was just beautiful!! So sweet and just perfect!!  This was my favorite part, as it was just such a quiet, heartfelt moment, where you could just feel the love in the room, with this new family... “Well, little one, it's just me and you right now. You wore your mommy out. I know that we'll get lots of chances to talk about things in the future, but for now I'd just like to set the record straight. Let you know what you're getting into, as it were."
"I can tell you right away that no one will ever love any child more than your mommy and I love you. *happy sigh!* Great story!  ~NICOLE
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Nice, WAFFy story! See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Thanks everyone for all the feedback. I'm humbled actually.  (me blushes profusely) I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a fun little break for me from my other story. Marcy
(Elrond's blessing at the departure of the company from Rivendell)
"Farewell, and may the blessing of Elves and Men and all Free Folk go with you.
May the stars shine upon your faces!"
-Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien
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What a sweetly written story.  I really liked it. I'm a big fan of the season 5 & 6 fanfic and this fit right in. Wonderful! 
Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.
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Marcy This is beautifully written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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