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Cute! I loved the Lois and Clark interaction and of course the information on Giraffes.
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Nice little story. Thank you so much for sharing
It's never too dark to be cool. 
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Cute! I loved the Lois and Clark interaction and of course the information on Giraffes. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading  -Bek
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Nice little story. Thank you so much for sharing Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading! -Bek (trying to post a picture of an okapi that my daughter drew to accompany the story, but I seem to be technologically challenged today and can't get it to work)
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I guess you liked that line!  Thanks for reading! -Bek 
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I guess you liked that line! Thanks for reading! -Bek For anyone wondering what's so dang hilarious, come to the discord server and ask someone a question we don't want to answer. XD
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I TOLD you Queenie would LOVE it!! :rotfl: And because I was “FORCED” to view and be distracted by this ridiculous picture in PM the other night, so now you have to be!  ![[Linked Image]](https://i.postimg.cc/Xv9p6zmN/2-EA38-B5-A-622-B-43-C9-A949-70-FD8-B675-D2-D.png)
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Goodness gracious!  Oh okapis.... Just popping back in to add this picture that my daughter drew to accompany the story ![[Linked Image]](https://i.postimg.cc/nzcZSStP/A1-AD3-C6-A-BAD5-4-E45-83-E6-2483-FAFD85-A5.jpg) She was, after all, the sleeping baby girl in the stroller... 
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H Bek! gah, I don’t know how you managed to convince me to go in the Bug House—never again, Clark. He bugged her until they did. And up ahead, oh! The Bat Cave. Ha!” Will they meet the inhabitant? A grin he loved. Er, liked. Right. He liked it. A lot. /Cocks eyebrow/ The stroller, which sat precariously on the top of a small slope. The stroller, which— “Clark, come on.” Superduty needed? All without waking the sleeping baby or spilling his popcorn. “Clark, that’s—really, Clark? That is not a giraffe.” Perfectly season one! The okapi really looks nothing like a giraffe.” “Well, actually, Lois…” The End. *End Notes: The okapi is an artiodactyl mammal that belongs to the family Giraffidae  Adorably written! She was, after all, the sleeping baby girl in the stroller... Eeep!  Michael
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Very good SuperBek! I think you've got the makings for a good children's book series here! Including the part where your daughter is miraculously secretly saved by the super hero. And illustrated by none other than that same little girl! Good job! 
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All without waking the sleeping baby or spilling his popcorn. “Clark, that’s—really, Clark? That is not a giraffe.” Perfectly season one! I admit, I did have the opening scene from S1 E3 (Neverending Battle) in mind when I wrote this! Very good SuperBek! I think you've got the makings for a good children's book series here! Including the part where your daughter is miraculously secretly saved by the super hero. And illustrated by none other than that same little girl! Good job! Ah, I can see it now... The Metropolis Zoo somehow has a series of near accidents, miraculously prevented at the last moment by an unseen hero. And all while Lois remains blissfully ignorant. My daughter would LOVE to make the drawings for me. Thank you all for reading! -Bek
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I LOVE zoos!! (So I already knew about the okapi... though I didn't see it coming when Clark said "Look! A giraffe!" What a great line, really!) Loved this ficlet! It was so fun! Great job with the characterizations! And I also loved the title  Thank you for sharing it!
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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I LOVE zoos!! (So I already knew about the okapi... though I didn't see it coming when Clark said "Look! A giraffe!" What a great line, really!) Loved this ficlet! It was so fun! Great job with the characterizations! And I also loved the title Thank you for sharing it! Haha! Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!! It was fun to write, and my daughter got a kick out of helping me learn about the okapi -Bek
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