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Posted By: SuperBek FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/02/22 09:11 AM
The New Adventures of Zooperman

Comments?

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-Bek
Posted By: Mike M Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/02/22 05:05 PM
Cute! I loved the Lois and Clark interaction and of course the information on Giraffes.
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/02/22 08:08 PM
Nice little story. Thank you so much for sharing
Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/02/22 10:35 PM
Originally Posted by Mike M
Cute! I loved the Lois and Clark interaction and of course the information on Giraffes.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading smile1

-Bek
Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/02/22 10:46 PM
Originally Posted by bakasi
Nice little story. Thank you so much for sharing


Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!

-Bek

(trying to post a picture of an okapi that my daughter drew to accompany the story, but I seem to be technologically challenged today and can't get it to work)
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/03/22 12:37 AM
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“Hey, Lois, look, a…giraffe!”

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA*wheeze*HAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!
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Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/03/22 04:47 PM
Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
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“Hey, Lois, look, a…giraffe!”

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA*wheeze*HAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!
rotflol rotflol rotflol rotflol rotflol


I guess you liked that line! clap

Thanks for reading!

-Bek hyper
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/03/22 05:21 PM
Originally Posted by SuperBek
I guess you liked that line! clap

Thanks for reading!

-Bek hyper


For anyone wondering what's so dang hilarious, come to the discord server and ask someone a question we don't want to answer. XD
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/03/22 09:07 PM
I TOLD you Queenie would LOVE it!! :rotfl:

And because I was “FORCED” to view and be distracted by this ridiculous picture in PM the other night, so now you have to be! lol

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Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/03/22 09:22 PM
Goodness gracious! rotflol

Oh okapis....

Just popping back in to add this picture that my daughter drew to accompany the story smile1

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She was, after all, the sleeping baby girl in the stroller... peep
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/11/22 02:03 PM
H Bek!

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gah, I don’t know how you managed to convince me to go in the Bug House—never again, Clark.
He bugged her until they did.

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And up ahead, oh! The Bat Cave. Ha!”
Will they meet the inhabitant?

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A grin he loved. Er, liked. Right. He liked it. A lot.
/Cocks eyebrow/

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The stroller, which sat precariously on the top of a small slope. The stroller, which— “Clark, come on.”
Superduty needed?

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All without waking the sleeping baby or spilling his popcorn. “Clark, that’s—really, Clark? That is not a giraffe.”
Perfectly season one!

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The okapi really looks nothing like a giraffe.” “Well, actually, Lois…” The End. *End Notes: The okapi is an artiodactyl mammal that belongs to the family Giraffidae
laugh

Adorably written!

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She was, after all, the sleeping baby girl in the stroller...
Eeep!

wave Michael
Posted By: Penny_Lane Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/16/22 06:56 PM
Very good SuperBek! I think you've got the makings for a good children's book series here! Including the part where your daughter is miraculously secretly saved by the super hero. And illustrated by none other than that same little girl!

Good job! thumbsup thumbsup
Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 12/16/22 07:52 PM
Originally Posted by Darth Michael
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All without waking the sleeping baby or spilling his popcorn. “Clark, that’s—really, Clark? That is not a giraffe.”
Perfectly season one!

I admit, I did have the opening scene from S1 E3 (Neverending Battle) in mind when I wrote this! smile1


Originally Posted by Penny_Lane
Very good SuperBek! I think you've got the makings for a good children's book series here! Including the part where your daughter is miraculously secretly saved by the super hero. And illustrated by none other than that same little girl!

Good job! thumbsup thumbsup

Ah, I can see it now... The Metropolis Zoo somehow has a series of near accidents, miraculously prevented at the last moment by an unseen hero. And all while Lois remains blissfully ignorant. My daughter would LOVE to make the drawings for me. lol

Thank you all for reading!
-Bek

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Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 02/21/23 10:24 PM
I LOVE zoos!! (So I already knew about the okapi... though I didn't see it coming when Clark said "Look! A giraffe!" rotflol What a great line, really!)

Loved this ficlet! It was so fun! Great job with the characterizations! And I also loved the title grin

Thank you for sharing it!
Posted By: SuperBek Re: FDK: The New Adventures of Zooperman (1/1) - 02/23/23 02:57 PM
Originally Posted by Anna B. the Greek
I LOVE zoos!! (So I already knew about the okapi... though I didn't see it coming when Clark said "Look! A giraffe!" rotflol What a great line, really!)

Loved this ficlet! It was so fun! Great job with the characterizations! And I also loved the title grin

Thank you for sharing it!

Haha! Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!! grin

It was fun to write, and my daughter got a kick out of helping me learn about the okapi lol

-Bek
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