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FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars 19/25 #287373 07/17/20 11:35 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Got some aftermath, got some angst, got some romance, got some interesting no-reason-for-it conflict. What more could a FoLC desire? Oh, right, maybe a link to the song, in case it's not familiar. Happy feedbacking! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars 19/25 Terry Leatherwood #287415 07/23/20 08:34 PM
Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 397 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA AmyPrime Beat Reporter
AmyPrime Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 397 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA	Cat presumably thinks Clark is going to tell Lois about being Superman... but I wonder what Clark thinks Cat thinks he's going to say. I love the line about "Tell me again. Pretend I've just had a major shock." Much resolution! The secret revealed! The question almost asked! Lois starting to think that maybe she is worthy of human relationships!

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars 19/25 Terry Leatherwood #287416 07/23/20 10:01 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote She kissed his hand again. “Every couple brings their joined pasts into the relationship, but being Superman’s wife, even if that’s not your primary identity, has to be a heavy load of baggage to carry around.” Her head nestled against his shoulder as she embraced him again. “And I’ve got more than enough emotional baggage for both of us. That's true. But If Lois can get past this hurdle, than she can learn to handle the rest. So glad they had a decent conversation. The angst factor was driving me crazy. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars 19/25 Terry Leatherwood #287421 07/24/20 02:54 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Time for the next chapter! But first, feedback! Amy, Cat might have been hinting at Clark confessing that he was Superman, but neither Clark nor Lois has any idea Cat has those suspicions. My intent was that Cat would warn Lois about Clark's pending avowal of love so obliquely that Lois could easily misunderstand his intent. And yes, Lois has traveled more of the recovery road than she had when we first saw her in chapter 1. Morgana, I'd like to apologize for the angst, but I did this deliberately because plot reasons. We'll get it sorted out a little better in the next chapters. One of which is coming up in moments! Yay! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

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