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devilsplat

(referring to the helicopter and its passengers)

Let me know what you think of our trio now. I hope it's as interesting to read as it was to write.


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A lot certainly happened in this chapter! EPRAD, the ball, the farm, and scenes in between. Clark is becoming entwined in this trio very quickly.

Nit: "He watched her stalk toward her apartment building’s front door," but he was supposed to bring her to the Planet.


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