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Posted By:
Terry Leatherwood
FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars: 5/25
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04/08/20
11:02 PM
(referring to the helicopter and its passengers)
Let me know what you think of our trio now. I hope it's as interesting to read as it was to write.
Posted By:
AmyPrime
Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars: 5/25
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06/17/20
03:19 AM
A lot certainly happened in this chapter! EPRAD, the ball, the farm, and scenes in between. Clark is becoming entwined in this trio very quickly.
Nit: "He watched her stalk toward her apartment building’s front door," but he was supposed to bring her to the Planet.
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