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(referring to the helicopter and its passengers)

Let me know what you think of our trio now. I hope it's as interesting to read as it was to write.
Posted By: AmyPrime Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars: 5/25 - 06/17/20 03:19 AM
A lot certainly happened in this chapter! EPRAD, the ball, the farm, and scenes in between. Clark is becoming entwined in this trio very quickly.

Nit: "He watched her stalk toward her apartment building’s front door," but he was supposed to bring her to the Planet.
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