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Hi all,

Short and not-so-sweet. peep
As always, all feedback welcomed.

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A vampire.

You made her a real-death (not real-life cause they're dead) vampire.

Even if she comes back at night, there's a huge kink in their relationship now.

Listen to Perry, FoLCs. Don't be cruel.


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Hi Terry,

Yup. I made her a vampire. I would prefer to be writing my usual cheery fanfic, but I'm just not in that head space these days.

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I can romanticize anything, Lynn. There's something bittersweet about Lois losing track of time with Clark, so much so that she turns to dust. *sigh*

Clever twist! I appreciate it for sure. (I'm not usually one for vampire stories, but there's a small part of me rooting for a fic where Clark's secret is Superman and Lois' secret is Vampirina and they're constantly missing each other.) laugh

Well done!


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Hi Mouserocks,

I know darker stories tend to be more your bailiwick then mine usually; I'm glad you appreciated this one. smile

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Hi Lynn!
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Clark had become increasingly concerned about Lois's unusual behavior recently. She would only go out at night and refused to eat anything -- even chocolate.
She been to Romania lately?

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He was horrified by her transformation to dust upon being touched by the first rays of sunlight.
Oops?

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As night became day, he started to understand the truth.
So, how *did* she sustain herself, then, given she couldn’t really nick his skin?

Cute title pun! Didn’t notice at first blush

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Hi Michael,,

As always, I am thoroughly enjoying your feedback on both my story and others.

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So, how *did* she sustain herself, then, given she couldn’t really nick his skin?
Cow's blood? (Have you ever seen the old television show "Forever Knight"?)

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Cute title pun!
I usually have a tough time coming up with good titles, but I must admit that I was pleased with that one.

Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

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Lynn


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