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FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 #286767 03/29/20 08:17 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Hi all, Short and not-so-sweet. As always, all feedback welcomed. Be well, Lynn

Re: FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 Lynn S. M. #286776 03/30/20 08:35 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	A vampire. You made her a real-death (not real-life cause they're dead) vampire. Even if she comes back at night, there's a huge kink in their relationship now. Listen to Perry, FoLCs. Don't be cruel. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 Lynn S. M. #286777 03/30/20 08:38 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Hi Terry, Yup. I made her a vampire. I would prefer to be writing my usual cheery fanfic, but I'm just not in that head space these days. Be well, Lynn

Re: FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 Lynn S. M. #286806 04/02/20 01:28 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	I can romanticize anything, Lynn. There's something bittersweet about Lois losing track of time with Clark, so much so that she turns to dust. sigh Clever twist! I appreciate it for sure. (I'm not usually one for vampire stories, but there's a small part of me rooting for a fic where Clark's secret is Superman and Lois' secret is Vampirina and they're constantly missing each other.) Well done! Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 Lynn S. M. #286807 04/02/20 07:27 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Hi Mouserocks, I know darker stories tend to be more your bailiwick then mine usually; I'm glad you appreciated this one. Be well, Lynn

Re: FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 Lynn S. M. #286816 04/02/20 03:23 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28	Hi Lynn! Quote Clark had become increasingly concerned about Lois's unusual behavior recently. She would only go out at night and refused to eat anything -- even chocolate. She been to Romania lately? Quote He was horrified by her transformation to dust upon being touched by the first rays of sunlight. Oops? Quote As night became day, he started to understand the truth. So, how did she sustain herself, then, given she couldn’t really nick his skin? Cute title pun! Didn’t notice at first Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: The Truth Dawns (1/1) - Kerth Weekly Challenge #10 Lynn S. M. #286817 04/02/20 03:33 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	Hi Michael,, As always, I am thoroughly enjoying your feedback on both my story and others. Quote So, how did she sustain herself, then, given she couldn’t really nick his skin? Cow's blood? (Have you ever seen the old television show "Forever Knight"?) Quote Cute title pun! I usually have a tough time coming up with good titles, but I must admit that I was pleased with that one. Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. Be well, Lynn

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