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Happy Halloween, FoLCs! For my treat this year - the scariest premise for a story that I could come up with!
Whatever you may do this Halloween, please stay safe, my friends.
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Scary, indeed! A very promising prologue, perfect for Halloween! Wondering what will come next! And how Lois will interact with the both of them! 
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Scary, indeed! A very promising prologue, perfect for Halloween! Wondering what will come next! And how Lois will interact with the both of them! Thanks, Mille! Trust me, this one goes much, much darker before the first hint of Lois appears...
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“Alex! Come here,” Lionel called, and the preteen looked up sharply at the sound of his name.
“What?” Alex asked, moodily.
“Your mother and I want you to meet someone.”
“Who? Some yokel farmer?” the boy asked with obvious distaste.
“No,” Letitia said with a soft scold. “We want you to meet your new brother, Kal.” Oh dear ... this can't be happening. 
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Yay! Another DeadlyChakram epic. Soooo looking forward to seeing what your twisted mind has come up with this time! This looks great! Only 21 weeks to go before I can read the rest... 
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Happy posting day!
Woo hoo! Okay not saying anything but....yes this should be interesting.
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ohno ohno ohno!!!
"HUMANS NEED FANTASY TO BE HUMAN. TO BE THE PLACE WHERE THE FALLING ANGEL MEETS THE RISING APE." -Terry Pratchett, Hogfather
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“Alex! Come here,” Lionel called, and the preteen looked up sharply at the sound of his name.
“What?” Alex asked, moodily.
“Your mother and I want you to meet someone.”
“Who? Some yokel farmer?” the boy asked with obvious distaste.
“No,” Letitia said with a soft scold. “We want you to meet your new brother, Kal.” Oh dear ... this can't be happening.  Oh, but it is! And it's gonna get much, much worse! 
Battle On,
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Yay! Another DeadlyChakram epic. Soooo looking forward to seeing what your twisted mind has come up with this time! This looks great! Only 21 weeks to go before I can read the rest... Thank you! This one is...probably the most twisted thing I've written so far. And I've gotten into Lex Luthor's head on occasion.  Lots of twists and turns in this one - I hope you enjoy the ride!
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Happy posting day!
Woo hoo! Okay not saying anything but....yes this should be interesting. Thanks! So glad you know the whole, sordid tale already!
Battle On,
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ohno ohno ohno!!! Oh yes, yes, yes! And it gets worse! SO much worse! 
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Oooh! Fabulous beginning! I can't wait to see where this goes! The prospect of Kal Luthor is exciting, and I'm not afraid of toys coming out of the box.  On to the next one!
Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain
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Oooh! Fabulous beginning! I can't wait to see where this goes! The prospect of Kal Luthor is exciting, and I'm not afraid of toys coming out of the box. On to the next one! Thanks, Mouse! Kal Luthor is one of the scariest things I could imagine. And as for out of the box? I took them out, tore up the packaging, and smashed the toys with a sledgehammer. 
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Well befitting of a Luthor Wha...?? Ooh. This will be interesting.
"Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book. 
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