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Clark stood mesmerized. The little angel Clark and the devil Clark were for once in agreement, as they danced around in circles in his head. Love the throwback to a previous chapter. This story made me smile a lot all the way through, Marcy. What a contentment-filling, happy-making ending. Thank you! I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."
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I absolutely agree with Incognito! I loved the way you brought back angel Clark and devil Clark from a previous chapter. And hey, isn't it just adorable that when Clark has decided that he is going to totally give in to Lois's seduction of him, then both angel Clark and devil Clark agree that he couldn't have made a better decision?    It's been great reading your story, and I hope it's not the last one you are going to post on these boards! Ann
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Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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I hope it's not the last one you are going to post on these boards! Amen to that! But, while you're thinking about what to write next , don't forget to send this one to the Archive!  LabRat 
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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A great ending to a fantastic story. I love it! Hope to see more from you soon.
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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DELETE/EDIT - never mind I figured it out. I lost out on a chapter and couldn't find it in a search and was confused why the title didn't have a chapter...I thought it was 6 and I guess it is 7. BLAH. :p GREAT STUFF!!! I love how gutsy Lois is. My favourite type of story. HEHE <jumps for joy>
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Top Banana
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This was simply great. I love how Lois forced Clark to reveal his secret to her verbally. I hope to hear more from you on the boards as well. This was great reading. 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Very nice. Would have loved a little snippet on the nfic side. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Great job! Very vivid descriptions. I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.  Susan
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
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Yay! Great ending! I look forward to more stories from you.  JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Marcy, This story was such fun and sweet and oh so many things!!! This was original, cracked me up multiple times (angel and devil Clarks twice gave me a wonderful mental image, so thanks for that!!) and had me all mushy at the end. I, too, hope to see a LOT more from you! ~NICOLE
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Columnist
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Great story. Have read it this weekend. Keep going, super writing and great revelation.
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