|
|
Joined: Jun 2003
Posts: 814
Features Writer
|
OP
Features Writer
Joined: Jun 2003
Posts: 814 |
Let me know what you think!
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2003
Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1
Top Banana
|
|
Top Banana
Joined: Nov 2003
Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 |
These criminals are a very confused lot! 
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2003
Posts: 120
Hack from Nowheresville
|
|
Hack from Nowheresville
Joined: Jun 2003
Posts: 120 |
That's great! I laughed out loud at the ending  Very cute, Shayne! Looking forward to more! Shells
You must be the change you wish to see in the world.
- Mahatma Gandhi
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2004
Posts: 457
Beat Reporter
|
|
Beat Reporter
Joined: Nov 2004
Posts: 457 |
/me comes out of the X-Phile closet...Love this story, Shayne.  Almost died laughing when they admitted to a mistake. <G>  And I love the Mulder part. <bg> Dave
'I just kind of died for you;
You just kind of stared at me'
- Aurora, Foo Fighters
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 4,058
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 4,058 |
LOL! Very cute Shayne, loved the ending with Mulder. I miss X files, the one with David Duchovny not the Terminator guy. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
|
|
|
|
Joined: Nov 2005
Posts: 77
Freelance Reporter
|
|
Freelance Reporter
Joined: Nov 2005
Posts: 77 |
That was great! I love the idiot kidnappers.  So, is there more? soon? please? 
Anyone can do any amount of work, provided it isn't the work he is supposed to be doing at that moment. ~Robert Benchley
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,846
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,846 |
Hi, Interesting. And why this never seemed to happen to Clark she’d never know. He was Superman’s best friend. He was the one who got the first story on the man, and he even lent him his washing machine from time to time.
It was a conspiracy. They didn’t kidnap him because he wasn’t a woman. A lot of these guys hadn’t been near any women except for their mothers in years. They just wanted to have a woman to strut and brag in front of, as though the first thing she was going to do when she got free wasn’t to educate them in feminine empowerment, using techniques taught at Dan’s Dojo.
Maria D. Ferdez.
---
Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,217
Kerth
|
|
Kerth
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,217 |
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jul 2003
Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Jul 2003
Posts: 2,977 Likes: 11 |
~•~
|
|
|
|
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 192
Hack from Nowheresville
|
|
Hack from Nowheresville
Joined: Feb 2005
Posts: 192 |
A great one-parter, thanks for publishing
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 9,362
Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
|
|
Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 9,362 |
LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
The Musketeers
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jul 2003
Posts: 370
Beat Reporter
|
|
Beat Reporter
Joined: Jul 2003
Posts: 370 |
|
|
|
|
Joined: Oct 2005
Posts: 378
Beat Reporter
|
|
Beat Reporter
Joined: Oct 2005
Posts: 378 |
**~~**
Swoosh --->
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2004
Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Jun 2004
Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 |
You know, this really was great fun. I can even envision Lois waking up after being returned to her apartment and being a little disappointed. After all, she is the world's leading kidnap victim, and to be picked up by mistake would be quite insulting. After all, shouldn't all the kidnappers have her picture in their operations and procedures manual? I mean, really!
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,761
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,761 |
That was amusing. I admit I didn't understand Mulder's comment about Clark, but oh well... Keep it up! AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
|
|
|
|
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,994
Pulitzer
|
|
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 2,994 |
LOL!!  My sides hurt from laughing so much! I am glad to see that the dam as burst on you muse's writer's block! We need more ShayneT stories! James
|
|
|
|
