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I'm not quite sure I understand where Lois' sudden change of attitude came from. What did Clark say wrong?

But...great segment. Your posting schedule needs to pick up, too! This is a great story and I cannot wait for the next part. Clark is just so wonderful!

BRAVA...again!

I think I can help here...

He forgot to tell her about going to the other Lois' universe and now she probably thinks there is something really going on between the two of them.

It's good Sara! I liked this part and seeing Clark's jelousy come though was an interesting twist. I see a classic Lane and Kent fight comming. More soon.

PS: My bet is 37 cause there is a lot that needs to be resloved.

~Lois Lane Wanna Be

Yet another fantastic part

Hi,

Great part.

Lois did know about the other lois,and that she had come to their universe, but she didn't know about Alt-Clarks's trip there- when he helped lois out when Clark was in trouble. She thought she had only spent a few days in the alt-universe and they hadn't seen each other again. And by the way, didn't Altclark kiss lois in that episode? If so, how is clark gonna explain that, especially after not telling her he was there?

Oh and by the way, great story

Thanks, Sheila! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. LLWB and Vive actually answered your question. In addition to not knowing about Clark's trip to the other universe, she's also a little miffed that Clark seemed to know about the connection and hadn't told her. I was intending for the mention of the Kents as the reason for Lois dropping the cup. Part of the reason they've bonded is because she thought they were both alone, orphaned. And a vague mention of "Kents" and "parents" in quite an enigmatic context (in Lois's POV), would be a bit of a shock. Also, pieces may be starting to fall into place for Lois.

I'm glad you pointed this out, Sheila. I think it could stand some editing and clarification before it hits the archive.

LLWB, thank you!! I'm glad you liked that little twist. And thanks for stepping in to answer Sheila's question.

Julia, thank you, thank you, thank you for picking out one of my favorite lines!

Maria, they definitely need to talk about the connection, don't they? They will... I'm just not saying when.

Vive, welcome to the boards!!! And thank you for stepping in to explain the question! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Part 20 coming up soon!

Sara