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Posted By: Sheila FDK: Away From the Sun 19 - 11/21/05 02:46 AM
I'm not quite sure I understand where Lois' sudden change of attitude came from. What did Clark say wrong? huh

But...great segment. Your posting schedule needs to pick up, too! This is a great story and I cannot wait for the next part. Clark is just so wonderful! love

BRAVA...again! hail
Posted By: LoisLaneWannaBe Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 19 - 11/21/05 01:56 PM
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I'm not quite sure I understand where Lois' sudden change of attitude came from. What did Clark say wrong?
I think I can help here...

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The unmistakable crack of china shattering pierced the silence. Clark whipped around to find Lois with her mouth hanging open and the pot of scalding hot coffee threatening to slip from her slackened grasp. He was there in a beat to catch it before he realized why she'd dropped the mug in the first place...

Twice. He'd screwed up twice. He should have told her...
He forgot to tell her about going to the other Lois' universe and now she probably thinks there is something really going on between the two of them. frown

It's good Sara! I liked this part and seeing Clark's jelousy come though was an interesting twist. I see a classic Lane and Kent fight comming. smile More soon.

PS: My bet is 37 cause there is a lot that needs to be resloved. wink

~Lois Lane Wanna Be
Posted By: Julia Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 19 - 11/21/05 05:51 PM
Yet another fantastic part thumbsup wave
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 19 - 11/21/05 08:19 PM
Hi,

Great part. hyper
Posted By: vive60 Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 19 - 11/22/05 10:23 PM
Lois did know about the other lois,and that she had come to their universe, but she didn't know about Alt-Clarks's trip there- when he helped lois out when Clark was in trouble. She thought she had only spent a few days in the alt-universe and they hadn't seen each other again. And by the way, didn't Altclark kiss lois in that episode? shock If so, how is clark gonna explain that, especially after not telling her he was there?

Oh and by the way, great story laugh
Posted By: KSaraSara Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 19 - 11/28/05 12:27 AM
Thanks, Sheila! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. LLWB and Vive actually answered your question. smile In addition to not knowing about Clark's trip to the other universe, she's also a little miffed that Clark seemed to know about the connection and hadn't told her. I was intending for the mention of the Kents as the reason for Lois dropping the cup. Part of the reason they've bonded is because she thought they were both alone, orphaned. And a vague mention of "Kents" and "parents" in quite an enigmatic context (in Lois's POV), would be a bit of a shock. Also, pieces may be starting to fall into place for Lois. wink

I'm glad you pointed this out, Sheila. I think it could stand some editing and clarification before it hits the archive. smile

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It's good Sara! I liked this part and seeing Clark's jelousy come though was an interesting twist.
LLWB, thank you!! I'm glad you liked that little twist. smile And thanks for stepping in to answer Sheila's question. laugh

Julia, thank you, thank you, thank you for picking out one of my favorite lines! smile1

Maria, they definitely need to talk about the connection, don't they? devil They will... I'm just not saying when. wink

Vive, welcome to the boards!!! And thank you for stepping in to explain the question! smile I'm glad you're enjoying the story. laugh

Part 20 coming up soon!

Sara
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