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I'd love to know what you think about Part 5! smile1


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I'm very much enjoying this story. I was glad to see another chapter posted. Can't wait to see how you finish it.

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"Kryptonian. You're... an alien."

He paled. "I think I'm gonna be sick."

Poor Clark. At least Lois is getting an understanding of what Clark went through dealing with his differences.

This has been an interesting take on the original. I like how you've dealt with Lois's and Clark's feelings. I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap it up!

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Okay, this is basically from the one I got to peek at earlier and hope that it still fits blush
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How did he remember that he loved her, of all things, when he couldn't even remember that he was the most powerful man on the planet?
Prioritizing? Not that he’s putting any pressure on her laugh

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She got the feeling she ought to say something, especially as he'd gone deathly silent in the last minute.
CLARK: Oh god oh god oh god. She doesn’t feel like that. She doesn’t want me to feel like that. Say, do I have superspeed, too, so I can run away from this mess?

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Oh, god. What was she supposed to do? She needed time, space to breathe, to think.
LOIS: It’s not you. It’s me. And I need some space. Okay?

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She had a superhero, best friend, partner, and love interest all rolled into one, who wasn't quite sure who he was or where he was from. He just knew he loved her. And she had to deal with all of that.
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That one memory should have opened the floodgates, theoretically.
Maybe a kiss?

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And seeing devastated dressed in red and blue spandex was more than wrong.
Maybe she should get him out of the spandex to get things moving again?

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How could her Clark have been so brave as to put it all on the line for the planet?
Her.

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What was she supposed to do now?
Big bed? Share?

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He'd made her cry. Again.
Oooh! Now look at that. They’re communicating. Not. Everything’s back to normal again! hyper

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Women didn't just break down when you told them you loved them, did they?
Well…according to US television and movies, yes they do.

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. Not when they loved you back. She should have said something.
LOIS: [Linked Image]

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He remembered kissing her, though. More than a few times. Were those dreams, too?

<Oh, Clark, I love you! I want to spend the rest of my life with you!>
Naughty dreams!

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And he... he'd punched a hole straight through the door of the armoire.
Oops?

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. "Clark! That's solid oak!"

She grabbed his hand and turned it over, as if looking for some sort of injury.
Lois, Superman. Superman, Lois.

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He tried not to notice that she hadn't let go of his hand yet. Maybe she wouldn't notice, either, and she'd keep holding it.
Awwwwww

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His feelings weren't quite as invulnerable as his body seemed to be.
That’s due to his proximity to brunette kryptonite.

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"I do," she started softly. "I do care for you..." She trailed off, ducking her head a little.
Awwww…she finally has a little brother! clap

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<Like a brother.>

He sucked in a breath and waited for the words.
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and... maybe the start of something so much more...
Awwwwww, she loves him like a Lannister girl loves her brother hyper

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She froze for a second. Start what? Why her mind suddenly supplied "kissing" as the answer, she had no clue.
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His smile grew warmer, and he nodded. "Maybe you could tell me more about these... uh, powers I have."
Maybe his x-ray vision?

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Where did these powers come from?"
Kissing Lois?

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"Cryptwhatian?"
[Linked Image]

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"Kryptonian. You're... an alien."

He paled. "I think I'm gonna be sick."
Hey! clap

So...part 6... hyper

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Thanks EL, Debbie, and Michael! I really appreciate the feedback, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it. smile

Part 6 posted shortly! (Did I mention there's an epilogue, too?)

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