FDK: Super Shook Up 5/6 - 06/29/14 09:16 PM
I'd love to know what you think about Part 5! 
Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 5/6 - 06/30/14 04:57 AM
I'm very much enjoying this story. I was glad to see another chapter posted. Can't wait to see how you finish it.
Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 5/6 - 06/30/14 06:21 AM
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"Kryptonian. You're... an alien."
He paled. "I think I'm gonna be sick."
He paled. "I think I'm gonna be sick."
Poor Clark. At least Lois is getting an understanding of what Clark went through dealing with his differences.
This has been an interesting take on the original. I like how you've dealt with Lois's and Clark's feelings. I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap it up!
Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 5/6 - 07/01/14 08:19 PM
Okay, this is basically from the one I got to peek at earlier and hope that it still fits 
Prioritizing? Not that he’s putting any pressure on her 
CLARK: Oh god oh god oh god. She doesn’t feel like that. She doesn’t want me to feel like that. Say, do I have superspeed, too, so I can run away from this mess?
LOIS: It’s not you. It’s me. And I need some space. Okay?
Maybe a kiss?
Maybe she should get him out of the spandex to get things moving again?
Her.
Big bed? Share?
Oooh! Now look at that. They’re communicating. Not. Everything’s back to normal again! 
Well…according to US television and movies, yes they do.
LOIS: ![[Linked Image]](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/ee/Roadrunner_looney_tunes.png)
Naughty dreams!
Oops?
Lois, Superman. Superman, Lois.
Awwwwww
That’s due to his proximity to brunette kryptonite.
Awwww…she finally has a little brother!
Awwwwww, she loves him like a Lannister girl loves her brother
Maybe his x-ray vision?
Kissing Lois?
![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/froehlich/d015.gif)
Hey!
So...part 6...
Michael
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How did he remember that he loved her, of all things, when he couldn't even remember that he was the most powerful man on the planet?
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She got the feeling she ought to say something, especially as he'd gone deathly silent in the last minute.
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Oh, god. What was she supposed to do? She needed time, space to breathe, to think.
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She had a superhero, best friend, partner, and love interest all rolled into one, who wasn't quite sure who he was or where he was from. He just knew he loved her. And she had to deal with all of that.
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That one memory should have opened the floodgates, theoretically.
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And seeing devastated dressed in red and blue spandex was more than wrong.
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How could her Clark have been so brave as to put it all on the line for the planet?
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What was she supposed to do now?
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He'd made her cry. Again.
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Women didn't just break down when you told them you loved them, did they?
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. Not when they loved you back. She should have said something.
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He remembered kissing her, though. More than a few times. Were those dreams, too?
<Oh, Clark, I love you! I want to spend the rest of my life with you!>
<Oh, Clark, I love you! I want to spend the rest of my life with you!>
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And he... he'd punched a hole straight through the door of the armoire.
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. "Clark! That's solid oak!"
She grabbed his hand and turned it over, as if looking for some sort of injury.
She grabbed his hand and turned it over, as if looking for some sort of injury.
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He tried not to notice that she hadn't let go of his hand yet. Maybe she wouldn't notice, either, and she'd keep holding it.
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His feelings weren't quite as invulnerable as his body seemed to be.
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"I do," she started softly. "I do care for you..." She trailed off, ducking her head a little.
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<Like a brother.>
He sucked in a breath and waited for the words.
He sucked in a breath and waited for the words.
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and... maybe the start of something so much more...
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She froze for a second. Start what? Why her mind suddenly supplied "kissing" as the answer, she had no clue.
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His smile grew warmer, and he nodded. "Maybe you could tell me more about these... uh, powers I have."
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Where did these powers come from?"
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"Cryptwhatian?"
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"Kryptonian. You're... an alien."
He paled. "I think I'm gonna be sick."
He paled. "I think I'm gonna be sick."
So...part 6...
Michael
Re: FDK: Super Shook Up 5/6 - 07/03/14 05:03 AM
Thanks EL, Debbie, and Michael! I really appreciate the feedback, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it. 
Part 6 posted shortly! (Did I mention there's an epilogue, too?)
Sara
Part 6 posted shortly! (Did I mention there's an epilogue, too?)
Sara