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and.... DONE  I really hope you enjoyed reading this last part, the whole story, just whatever  ~NICOLE
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AWwwww. Awwwwww. Awwwww! I loved it. It was so sweet and wonderful. Thank you for making my day. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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great story!!! I lovede this from the beginning to the end. What a great ending too! I'm all smiles  Great job!! Lola
"We're both barefoot, both flushed, and we both look guilty as hell. Clark has finger-combed his hair but I'm positive mine looks like I was just f… fished out of the river."
<3 this fic!
'The Next Step' By Sue S.
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Cute proposal.
During the first few posts I was feeling like Lois' grief reaction was a bit over-done, but I have to admit that I'm glad I persisted with the story. The contrast between the too-angsty-for-my-taste beginning and the too-waffy-for-my-taste ending is actually very well-balanced and I find that I enjoyed the story after all. Thank you for sharing.
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Wonderful story Nicole! first crying, then smiling, you have had my attention from the beginning to the end! Brava!  simona 
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awwww - so sweet!
great job, Nicole - on a wonderful story. i'm sorry i haven't been posting but I certainly enjoyed this more than I could have hoped!
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Hi, 
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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A great ending to a wonderful story!  Susan
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. 
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I absolutely loved this story. The end was so sweet! And I can't believe I didn't think of that before to account for the baby. That was so simple! It would certainly explain why Lois was so grief stricken. Like I said, I absolutely loved this story. Great Job! ~Kristen
Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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**Insert big happy sigh** Thanks for sharing; I really enjoyed reading this story. JD
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Soooo beautiful, so sweet. I loved it.
Thank you
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Thank you, JD and Sil. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story!  ~nicole
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Nicole I've just managed to catch up here. This is a wonderful story. You did a fabulous job portraying Lois and Clark's emotions. I love it. Tricia 
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i just read it on the archive.. nice, wow, congratulations!!!  what a good way to start a day
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I just read this tonite on the fanfic site, and wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved it. Usually I don't give a lot of feeback on stories, but this one took me through a rollercoaster of emotions... There were times when I was nearly in tears and others where I couldn't quit smiling... Very well written, & I hope you'll continue to write more stories!
*Blayne*
Clark: You are really high maintenance, you know it?
Lois: But I'm worth it.
Clark: Not exactly what you had in mind, huh?
Lois: Let's see. So far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, been treated as your girlfriend, and insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this.
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Thank you, CK 9397 and Blayne! I'm so glad you enjoyed this! ~NICOLE
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Nicole, this was wonderful! And here I thought fanfic was boring compared to nfic, because it never seemed able to deal with real feelings and real relationship issues. But your story is so beautiful and so emotional, I couldn't stop grinning when I had read it! Lovely! Hey, I want to read it in one piece. Is it posted someplace where I can read it from beginning to end in one go?
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Thanks, TOC, for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! It actually just got uploaded to the archive, so you can find it at lcfanfic.com under What's New or by title/author. There you can read it all at once. Thanks again!! NICOLE
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