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and.... DONE hyper


I really hope you enjoyed reading this last part, the whole story, just whatever laugh


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AWwwww. Awwwwww. Awwwww! I loved it. It was so sweet and wonderful. Thank you for making my day. Laura


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great story!!! I lovede this from the beginning to the end. What a great ending too! I'm all smiles smile1

Great job!!

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"We're both barefoot, both flushed, and we both look guilty as hell. Clark has finger-combed his hair but I'm positive mine looks like I was just f… fished out of the river."

<3 this fic!
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Cute proposal.

During the first few posts I was feeling like Lois' grief reaction was a bit over-done, but I have to admit that I'm glad I persisted with the story. The contrast between the too-angsty-for-my-taste beginning and the too-waffy-for-my-taste ending is actually very well-balanced and I find that I enjoyed the story after all. Thank you for sharing.

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Wonderful story Nicole! smile1
first crying, then smiling, you have had my attention from the beginning to the end! Brava! thumbsup

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awwww - so sweet!

great job, Nicole - on a wonderful story. i'm sorry i haven't been posting but I certainly enjoyed this more than I could have hoped!

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Hi,

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A great ending to a wonderful story! dance
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I absolutely loved this story. The end was so sweet! And I can't believe I didn't think of that before to account for the baby. That was so simple! It would certainly explain why Lois was so grief stricken.

Like I said, I absolutely loved this story. Great Job! thumbsup

~Kristen


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Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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They are going tomorrow... their lives are JUST beginning... there is lots to do and lots to come for them, I wanted to end on just them, planning the future, happy and together. No one else around... smile


You guys are great! I love reading threads on these boards, because they're so expressive and the chats are so lively... the feedback in general is so helpful too. I know this story will be going through a bit of revision now that I'm done posting! wink


Thank you EVERYONE for reading and for the feedback!! It was MUCH appreciated! smile1

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grr... again w/ the coffee!!!

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**Insert big happy sigh**

Thanks for sharing; I really enjoyed reading this story.

JD
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Soooo beautiful, so sweet. I loved it.
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Thank you, JD and Sil. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story! blush

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I've just managed to catch up here. smile

This is a wonderful story. You did a fabulous job portraying Lois and Clark's emotions. smile1 I love it.

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i just read it on the archive..
nice, wow, congratulations!!! sloppy
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I just read this tonite on the fanfic site, and wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved it. Usually I don't give a lot of feeback on stories, but this one took me through a rollercoaster of emotions... There were times when I was nearly in tears and others where I couldn't quit smiling... Very well written, & I hope you'll continue to write more stories!


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Lois: But I'm worth it.

Clark: Not exactly what you had in mind, huh?
Lois: Let's see. So far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, been treated as your girlfriend, and insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this.
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Thank you, CK 9397 and Blayne! I'm so glad you enjoyed this! smile

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Nicole, this was wonderful! And here I thought fanfic was boring compared to nfic, because it never seemed able to deal with real feelings and real relationship issues. But your story is so beautiful and so emotional, I couldn't stop grinning when I had read it! Lovely! Hey, I want to read it in one piece. Is it posted someplace where I can read it from beginning to end in one go?

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Thanks, TOC, for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! It actually just got uploaded to the archive, so you can find it at lcfanfic.com under What's New or by title/author. There you can read it all at once.

Thanks again!!

smile NICOLE


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