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#242376 07/19/05 09:52 AM
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Here's my latest creation. All thoughts and comments are greatly appreciated! laugh

Fall to Pieces - Avril Lavigne

If anyone can/wants to make an RP version of it, be my guest. smile

~Anna

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Yay! I love Avril (well, there are a few songs I don't like... wink ). This is one of those songs I haven't listened to too often so I would have never expected a L&C vid from it! But you did an awesome job, Anna!!

On with the play by play comments goofy

Ooh... nice first lyric match!

OOOH!! NICE!!!!!! *Awesome* lyric match on "things you can't undo"!!

Wowie... and you keep going with the matches!

AWWWW!! The first "I just want to cry in front of you! *sniff*

Ack!! You're killing me with waffs, Anna!! The TOGOM part... *sigh*

Gah!!! And the first kiss!!! *melts into waffy puddle*

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Ohhhh now I'm all puddley.

Where's the mop? This just won't do.

I definitely got misty-eyed during the second verse. TOGOM fit so well with it.

What else, what else. I guess I didn't realize how often Lois seems to...fall to pieces. I'll be first in line to call her a mess inside, but I'm not sure I was aware how often she shows it...at least around Clark.

Great, great job.
JD


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For some reason it plays until the line "I looked away" and then it stops and says error on it for me. I downloaded it 3 times. It comes in stuffed. when I unstuff it it gives me an error. Could you send me an unstuffed version? Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
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Very nice! Like the scenes of Lois "falling to pieces". Well done.

PS: I liked your "Save a Horse" video too I just didn't comment. smile Keep making awsome videos!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be


"Live with intention.
Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
~Mary Anne Radmacher
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I can't download it either!! frown frown frown When I go to unzip it it says "file is corrupted." Help! I love this song and I would really LOVE to see this video!


"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve

"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker

DON'T DOUBT THE ROUTH
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I don't usually put up unzipped versions of my vids for download because sometimes people stream them off the site and it eats up my bandwidth, but since so many people are having trouble with this one, I'll make an exception.

Please right click on it, and choose 'save target as.' Hopefully this will work for you guys. smile

Fall to Pieces

~Anna

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Thanks Anna, you're the best!! I'm off to download it now, keeping my fingers crossed it works. wink


"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve

"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker

DON'T DOUBT THE ROUTH
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Wow Anna! That was just great...as usual of course thumbsup I just LOVE the begining!

Great Job!
Steph


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Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore he's chumpy!"
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
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We need to have video music awards on this site, the choices are so amazing.

Another GREAT vid Anna! Loved how you showed the progression of their relationship all the way through and you matched up all the lyrics each time, so impressive! You must have gone through so many episodes! Loved, loved it!

~Liz


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Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
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Thanks to everyone who has posted feedback so far. Great to know you guys liked it! laugh

Liz, the fandom actually does have an awards process for videos. In fact, this years ceremony was just a week and a half ago. The Official Alt-Kerths Page has all the details, including the log of the ceremony. As you can see in this thread , the committee is probably going to make it an annual event. Hopefully you can join in the fun next year. thumbsup

~Anna

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Thanks Anna that worked. Very nice sad video. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
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Really, really good, Anna! I love videos which tell a story, and this one did it so well. smile Adored all the hugs, especially the ones with Clark. drool

Great job!


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Coming in late, as usual... this is really good, Anna! You've got great matches to the lyrics -- I especially liked the first "sit and stare at you" with Clark's empty desk... and of course the bad-excuse-to-revelation sequence was awesome.

Great work! thumbsup

PJ


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He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

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I love this song! smile1 I was just thinking about how good a song it'd be for an L&c video.
The videos awesome!

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That video rocked! I love that song. Great editing and the TOGOM part was perfect. Keep up the great work.

Rach


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Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate!
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Sara: LMAO the *chocolate* isn't smeared in chocolate!
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Purrfect! (sorry, I liked this vid so much, I'm purring)


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WOW! An excellent video! smile1 I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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Always loved this song and for some weird reason never thought of it as applying to LNC. Stupid, stupid, stupid! laugh When you put it this way, it's so obvious! clap

Just love the lyric/clip matches. Especially the one with the empty desk that Pam mentioned, and the one where Lois is babbling ten to the dozen in her biker costume over 'don't want to talk about it'. LOL!

Absolutely terrific, Anna! Superb!

This is definitely going on my list of nominees for next year. wink


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