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Hey!! I would have posted earlier, but I was having computer problems

Anyway, I hope you like part 12!!

~NICOLE

How sweet! I'm so happy that their love for each other is out in the open. Now how is Clark going to react to the news? I'll be obsessively checking the boards for the next post!
Susan

Hey, Nicole

I've been reading your fanfic since you've started posting it but I've been bad about feedback, sorry. Of course I couldn't stay quiet now after reading this part. Serious, you've been killing me with your cliffhangers. It's already past 3am here and I couldn't go to bed without reading this part! Of course after reading it I couldn't go to bed without saying how much I'm loving every single line of your story. It's just really amazing! I love the way you're portraying the characters and their emotions... so believable!

You're killing me again with a cliffhanger though! I can't wait to see how Clark will react to the news! I think we're in for a very emotional scene and hopefully some sweet kisses, huh? Don't make us wait too much for the next part, Nicole. I'm going to check the boards every minute from now on

Amazing job!

Best wishes,
Raquel (who is going to bed now thinking about how Clark will react and what will happen next )

Hi!

I'm another one who has not been posting feedback (sorry! ), but I've been reading this story every day. (I love the daily postings! )

Like Raquel, I couldn't go to bed without reading my daily dose of To Wake from Dreams. Luckily, I only had to stay up until 1 am. hehe

I think I can guess what Clark's reaction will be . What I can't wait to find out is, how are you going to bring Clark back from the dead, after over a month?

Anxiously awaiting Part 13...

- Vicki

Finally, Lois and Superman (because there still is no Clark Kent)have professed their love for each other and Lois is secure in the knowledge that her actions didn't kill the man she loves.

Clark now knows that Lois actually loves him. It has the look of a happily ever after, but then Lois gives him the bad news, and "bam!"... unhappy ending.

How very cruel.

Tank (who thinks that Clark won't want to find a way to come back now)

Oh, Tank...the world would have ended by now if everyone hated kids like you PROFESS TO -LOL

Very sweet...and you explained some of my issues about why Clark didn't realize that Lois was there. I guess somehow he was in such a daze that he didn't want to face reality...and blocked everything out.

How romantic <sigh>

Now...let's have the next part ASAP!

I'm a big fan, Nicole. I caught up with this story in one long, wonderful read.

And it's gorgeous. I love the direction you've taken. The due you've given Clark's grief, Lois's grief. Jimmy and Perry, too.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

CC

Clark will no doubt love that Lois is pregnant, which means, to him at least, marrage, which will instantaneously turn Lois off. But if you can have sex and get pregnant in your sleep, you can get married in your sleep as well. Life is but a dream after all.

I just love your story, Nicole!
I like your Lois, demostrating all her despair about Clark's death and her happyness for his "resurrection" and his declaration of love; I expecially like that your Lois'reaction to Clark revelation has very little of anger and a lot of relief!
Looking forwards your next post for Clark's reaction

simona

Hi, all!! Thank you for the responses to this last installment

Oh, so I just saw how LONG my last reply in Part 11 was, and am so sorry for those who suffered through reading it!!!! I didn't realize I'd gone on and on like that, lol. I tend to do that when I talk too

Thank you, Raquel and Vicki for you assurances that you ARE reading the story, if not posting feedback!! It's great to know there are people reading in general!! Thanks for letting me know you are with this story and enjoying it!

And Tank... I think I am beginning to understand what those famous words around here - "Tank ending" - mean!! LOL. Thanks for sticking with me!! Maybe I'll take the story in that direction and do an unhappy ending :rolleyes:

LOL!! I am glad you thought so, Chris... I have thought about your comments from the "morning after post" in which I purposely had neither of them realize the other one had shared that bed... and hoped you would stick with me and see this part and that it would be justifiable to you. Thank you!!

Thank you, CC! I'm glad you like it

Thank you, Simona, for writing that. Many people have written this and I am incredibly happy. This story took me to this route, it was actually not in the gameplan, but it ended up being this reaction, and after reading so many people writing, in the buildup to their first confrontation, that she'll hate him so much, I was so worried that how I wrote it wouldn't translate well, even though I could picture it and thought it had naturally developed THAT way in this story. But EVERYONE seems to have thought it was understandable in context and/or that it made sense, even if they think that Lois SHOULD slay him for it!! So I am grateful and happy!!


SJH, your comments are hysterical! I love it!


Thank you EVERYONE for sticking w/ this story and for the feedback! It's appreciated! And then some


~NICOLE

ps- part 13 will be up later tonight. Sorry... I just haven't had a chance to proof it before posting, so I can't do it yet.

Aw nice chapter. I am glad that everything is out in the open. Now get Clark back to living again and get both of them back to the Planet. Oh and could you marry them also<g> Laura