Hey there Nan!
Yesterday I started with reading your 'Home' series and right now I've finished with part 18 of 'Obsession'. It probably won't do any good to start rambling about my feedback of all parts right here and now
But let me say that I've immensely enjoyed the series so far, you managed to invent some rather uncommon crime stories, one of them even having some resemblance to the space-shuttle incident in the show.
Focusing on the relationship-parts of the series, you also did an outstanding job in NOT concentrating on the angsty parts too much
That's a pleasant change for sure.
I noticed that the beginning of this series was over five years ago and you're still/again writing at it, that endurance should be worth a Kerth in my opinion
Anyways, I'm looking forward to your idea of wrapping up this story, most of the details are already known and therefore it shouldn't be more than one more twist.
Oh and I don't know about other people here but the idea of intertwined souls through life and death is an interesting concept I don't mind at all. Quite the contrary I'm interested in your picture of the distant future, especially the changes and developments in society like the marriage-contracts. By the way, I haven't read earlier feedback or your reasoning but you seem to use that fact very casually. Have you ever thought about some background-information on that one or why someone with Clark's upbringing doesn't voice a critical word at degrading marriage at all?
Before finishing this post, I'd like to ask if you're going to write another continuation, maybe some time after the baby was born because that'll change their lives and I'm really curious about how they adjust to that.
