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Hmm, problems in the parking?  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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HI Nan.
I've been away from my computer for a while and I'm just catching up.
Looks like Lori is getting herself into another scrape while Clark is standing nobly by and protecting her. I do wonder what kind of trouble she'll be getting herself into, though.
I'm ready for the next part.
gerry
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Good stuff, as always Very gripping detail on the car chase -- I liked the details about the make & models of the various cars. It really made the scene come alive. I wish Lori had been a little less self-sufficient, though; it might have been very interesting to have one of the supermen follow that green car... PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Originally posted by ChiefPam:
it might have been very interesting to have one of the supermen follow that green car... Pam has a good point.... Though obviously we don't expect you to change the story drastically after the fact, this does reference something I've been curious about.... Where are the other Metropolis superheros? We haven't seen much of them showing up to rescue Lori -- shouldn't they all be popping up until Clark telepath's that he's got it covered?
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Remember, this is a city of several million people. The superheroes have lots of business elsewhere, including their own lives, other than to watch Clark's wife unless they know for sure she's in danger.
Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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And of course, Lori wasn't in any real danger, and she was perfectly capable of taking care of herself. As she proved. I was just curious about where that green car ended up... PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Don't worry, Pam, we'll get more about the green car -- or at least it's driver -- very soon.  Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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Nan Another excellent part! Tricia 
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Very well written. More soon please.
James
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