I need you to help me find out who's doing this and stop him before he kills anybody else!
Why does automatically assume it's a man? My first thought was it was a woman - someone who is jealous that Conner might have paid too much attention to these other women. Which of course makes Lori the perfect next target...
I'm glad he interrupted us, ... I don't want to have to explain (to my mother) that my doctor is in Houston and that I fly out to see her once a week.
For a moment there, given the title is Obsession, I was tempted to think this was going to be a story about Lori's mother and her obsession with her daughters!
Which would make a good sub-plot... hint hint.
I'm kind of wondering why they just don't tell them
the secret. It seems lots of people know - what's two more? (Plus - don't both daughters have super-spouses?)
Glad to see you writing on this again!