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Oh... Err... Hi? #145957 12/06/04 09:17 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 140 Sweden Cherry OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Cherry Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 140 Sweden	Hi waves I'm new! gives best please-like-me -smile XD Anyway, I'm going to write my first L&C fiction and I'm wondering if anyone would be interested being a long time beta for me...? As for my plot... Lois is in an accident and Clark (as Superman) brings her in to the hospital as she's rather banged up. There, Clark gets to know she's in a coma. Meanwhile, Lois wakes up in a different part of Metropolis, in the body of a eight year old boy. Now, Lois must struggle with trying to convince Clark that she actually is Loisa and with the boys bullies... Well, it's just breifly what I've stored... evil grin I hope someone finds this original and interesting enough. I really want to write this fic. runs and hides "How many times must I tell you? Queens consume nectars and ambrosia, not hot dogs."

Re: Oh... Err... Hi? #145958 12/06/04 09:29 AM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 111 Toronto dundan8 Hack from Nowheresville
dundan8 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 111 Toronto	Well, let me be the first to welcome you to the forums, and I must say excellent choice for an avatar. From my experience being your own beta is actually better from a learning stand point (learn how to write your own fiction, punctuation, grammar, etc.), practically. You can always bug the FoLCs here for comments as your story develops anyway. But there is a thread about beta readers willing to read. Maybe you can send one of them a personal invitation.

Re: Oh... Err... Hi? #145959 12/06/04 09:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Hi Cherry Welcome to the boards. Your story idea sounds really fascinating; I've always liked those body switching stories... I can't help you write it, sadly, but I'll be waiting to read it PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: Oh... Err... Hi? #145960 12/06/04 12:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Hey, Cherry - welcome to the playground! Have fun. You could also try here for a beta. Some willing FoLCs have volunteered their time. All you need do is choose one and mail them. Good luck with the story! LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: Oh... Err... Hi? #145961 12/06/04 09:19 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 140 Sweden Cherry OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Cherry Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 140 Sweden	Quote Well, let me be the first to welcome you to the forums, and I must say excellent choice for an avatar Thank you. I had problems choosing an avatar. :p Quote Welcome to the boards. Your story idea sounds really fascinating; I've always liked those body switching stories... I can't help you write it, sadly, but I'll be waiting to read it You too? I'm slightly obsessed with those. XD Perhaps I should just post what I've written, so people can comment on it. "How many times must I tell you? Queens consume nectars and ambrosia, not hot dogs."

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