Hi *waves* I'm new! *gives best please-like-me -smile* XD

Anyway, I'm going to write my first L&C fiction and I'm wondering if anyone would be interested being a long time beta for me...?

As for my plot... Lois is in an accident and Clark (as Superman) brings her in to the hospital as she's rather banged up. There, Clark gets to know she's in a coma.
Meanwhile, Lois wakes up in a different part of Metropolis, in the body of a eight year old boy. Now, Lois must struggle with trying to convince Clark that she actually is Loisa and with the boys bullies...

Well, it's just breifly what I've stored... *evil grin* I hope someone finds this original and interesting enough. I really want to write this fic. *runs and hides*

Well, let me be the first to welcome you to the forums, and I must say excellent choice for an avatar.



From my experience being your own beta is actually better from a learning stand point (learn how to write your own fiction, punctuation, grammar, etc.), practically.

You can always bug the FoLCs here for comments as your story develops anyway. But there is a thread about beta readers willing to read. Maybe you can send one of them a personal invitation.

Hi Cherry

Welcome to the boards. Your story idea sounds really fascinating; I've always liked those body switching stories... I can't help you write it, sadly, but I'll be waiting to read it

PJ

Hey, Cherry - welcome to the playground! Have fun.

You could also try here for a beta. Some willing FoLCs have volunteered their time. All you need do is choose one and mail them.

Good luck with the story!

LabRat

Thank you. I had problems choosing an avatar. :p

You too? I'm slightly obsessed with those. XD

Perhaps I should just post what I've written, so people can comment on it.