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slave race 2, comments #137326 04/25/03 05:24 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 26 Nethra OP Blogger
OP Nethra Blogger Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 26	Nan, This is incredible. I didn't start it before because I came late to the party, but I'm glad to start now. Thanks for writing, Nethra (eagerly awaiting the next post)

Re: slave race 2, comments #137327 04/25/03 05:19 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 317 Canada Bumpkin Beat Reporter
Bumpkin Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 317 Canada	I did not really see any changes in this part... but it was just as good the second time around... might do to add more introspection tho...to slow it down a touch... Marns ~pobody's nerfect

Re: slave race 2, comments #137328 04/25/03 07:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Boy, things happen fast when you don't have to communicate with your mouth! I am so glad that she isn't going to marry that Cecil jerk, but I'm sure we haven't heard the last of him. So...Ed, Cory, and Loreen are all 17 and Psychic...Hmm I sense a pattern here.... This is a great story! James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: slave race 2, comments #137329 04/25/03 03:39 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN E EmilyH Columnist
EmilyH Columnist E Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN	This is interesting and a good read so far. Keep it up. I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2

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