Nan,

This is incredible. I didn't start it before because I came late to the party, but I'm glad to start now.

Thanks for writing,

Nethra
(eagerly awaiting the next post)

I did not really see any changes in this part... but it was just as good the second time around... might do to add more introspection tho...to slow it down a touch...

Boy, things happen fast when you don't have to communicate with your mouth!

I am so glad that she isn't going to marry that Cecil jerk, but I'm sure we haven't heard the last of him.

So...Ed, Cory, and Loreen are all 17 and Psychic...Hmm I sense a pattern here....

This is a great story!

James

This is interesting and a good read so far. Keep it up.