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Over in the Polls folder, there's a bit of discussion going on about what it would take to motivate a bit more... action, shall we say. And I just remembered another challenge which went down very well in my other fandom. It's called the First Lines Challenge. Basic principle: people post sentences - could be lines of dialogue, could be narrative - and other people write stories using one of those lines as the first line of their story.

So, if LabRat posted "Fancy seeing you here!" Tempus said to Lex Luthor, then I could write a story with that as the opening line. Could be humour, could be serious, could be angsty, could be complete and total crack.

I'll kick things off with a few lines, then.


1. "What do you mean, we're fraternal twins?"

2. A terrifying wail went up as, with an ominous crack, the bridge finally collapsed and fell into the river.

3. "Jimmy, are you wearing a bra?"

4. "How long have you known you could fly?"


Enjoy!

Wendy

OOO! This sounds like fun...I think I will go for door number 4...but knowing me I will start it, then my muse will leave and it will never be heard from again...

Here are some lines:
1) Where did the monkey come from?
B) Qui au coupe la fromage?
Lastly) What in the Sam Hill is wrong with you?

Off the top of my head:

1. "They make chocolate flavoured soda now? I want some!"

2. It was not a cold and dreary night, but it sure felt like one.

3. "I want a divorce."

4. "What's the point of slipping into something more comfortable, if I'm only going to slip you out of it in five seconds?"

5. Jimmy was not who they all thought he was.

6. Star labs was noticebaly covered in a thick silvery substance as Superman landed in the parking lot next to a throng of curious onlookers.

7. Metropolis University would never feel the same after Lois and Linda finished their battles.

8. "Cat, will you make my life complete and marry me?"
"I thought you would never ask, Jimmy."

9. "This is starting to feel a lot like a TV show."
"Any in particular?"


I'm pretty busy right now (moving across the country), but I might try my hand again at writing after giving up on my last attempt. I'll just wait to see what other sentences get suggested.

Desiree

1. Clark Kent was pissed.

I couldn’t help but be silly and comment on a couple of these.


“Yes, Lois. For a long time. Yahoo! And I’m not talking about the email service.”


Believe it or not, they are actually married in one of my fics. It kind of started as a joke, but I seemed to have made it work.


1. Why are you kissing my sister?

2. “Could you please explain to me who Zara is?” Lois hissed.

“Umm... Well, you see Lois. I... uhh... We were... well, we...”

Zara shoved the door open. “Yes, please *do* tell her who I am,” she said angrily. “And then you can tell her who this is!”

Really? Which one is that?

A New Hero. A work in progress that is currently quite neglected. But Cat and Jimmy do not play a big part in the story. Cat does find out who Superman really is though.

Have totally been trying to find a way to do this fic in less than an hour and it's so not coming to me.

However, I do think it would fit nicely in a WIP . Or two actually. Hmm... will have to ponder that... .

Carol

Lois stared at her 'friends' in frustration. "But what if I don't want to cut my hair short?"

Tank (who tried to resist, but just couldn't)

cp33 did one! Here is the link... How Long?
And the FDK..... Comments

1. "You named him *what*?!"

2. The stillness of the afternoon was broken by the sound of a Kryptonian being chased by a madwoman with a meat-fork.

3. Planes engines were *not* supposed to sound like giant gears.

Carol mentioned in here somewhere that she couldn't do this in an hour.

Does it have to be done in hour? 'Cuz I gots an idea but it is going to take soooooo much longer than that.


Anyway here are my contibutions:

1. Could you repeat that? I know I didn't hear you correctly.

2. You want me to do what?

3. Do me a favor: see that freeway over there? Go play frogger.

4. I am going to say this once and only once; you had better not be holding out on me.

Thanx!
ORNG

ORG - No - I've been combining these with Labby's one hour challenge in my Assignment Series. I think the one I was thinking of was the fraternal twin one. There's 5 of those btw but not all of them start with one of these lines - I think 3 of them do at the moment.

Carol

Thanks Carol! That was BIG help.

Er, actually it was the Zara line now that I look back.

Of course, I have no clue what WiPs I was talking about at the time...

Oh, waith... that's one... /ponder. Will be at least six months most likely before I get to write on that one...

Carol

Two Superheroes walked into a bar.

"But,I'm only going to shoot him a little bit!" Lois snarled.

............................................
"Smallville, I assure you I have No desire what so ever to know what you and Cat were doing on the supply closet for the last half hour."

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"Son." Perry said with a thoughtful look on his face as he watched Lois stride across the news room floor her body rigid with anger. "It really is time for you to "Bust a move" you know!"