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(AWESOME challenge, Lynn--I had SO MUCH fun writing this! LOL) - If you don't count the heading it's 100 words exactly. -W.D.
A Super Hot Drabble
by Wanda Detroit
rated: PG-13
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Lois sighed musically, reclining back on the rumpled satiny sheets. Her hair was spread artfully across the pillow, and her eyes burned into his, screaming come-hither, take me NOW.
Clark stood over her, eying her gauzy gown that did little to conceal her exquisite flesh. His shirt was open, revealing the most incredible muscles she had ever seen. He soon joined Lois on the bed, his heart pounding with anticipation--
Clark’s voice scared her out of her wits. “What are you working on?”
Lois clapped her palm over the screen. “It’s my latest novel, and NO, you cannot read it!”
"He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.
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Lois clapped her palm over the screen. “It’s my latest novel, and NO, you cannot read it!” I can just see Lois's expression. That was good.  Caryn
"With words one can escape reality..."
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lol! great punchline <g>
PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Fabulous, Wanda!! I love it!
But...I want to read Lois's novel! Please? Can you finish that? You can use as many words as you want <g>.
Thanks for sharing.
Lynn
You know that boy'd walk on water for you? Or he'd drown tryin'. -Perry White to Lois in Just Say Noah
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What was great about this one, Wanda, was the twist at the end. I've seen things that call themselves drabbles -- and, no, I'm not going to say where I saw them! -- that are really nothing more than a couple of disjointed paragraphs, strong on atmosphere but weak on everything else. This one, though, hits all the right notes; it works really well. Nicely done! Chris
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Wanda, Great job!  )
"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'
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 That was great!
I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2
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Wanda This is great. I enjoyed it immensely. Tricia 
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Hehe  Nice one. AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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