(AWESOME challenge, Lynn--I had SO MUCH fun writing this! LOL) - If you don't count the heading it's 100 words exactly. -W.D.

A Super Hot Drabble
by Wanda Detroit
rated: PG-13
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Lois sighed musically, reclining back on the rumpled satiny sheets. Her hair was spread artfully across the pillow, and her eyes burned into his, screaming come-hither, take me NOW.

Clark stood over her, eying her gauzy gown that did little to conceal her exquisite flesh. His shirt was open, revealing the most incredible muscles she had ever seen. He soon joined Lois on the bed, his heart pounding with anticipation--

Clark’s voice scared her out of her wits. “What are you working on?”

Lois clapped her palm over the screen. “It’s my latest novel, and NO, you cannot read it!”

I can just see Lois's expression.

That was good.
Caryn

lol! great punchline <g>

PJ

Fabulous, Wanda!! I love it!

But...I want to read Lois's novel! Please? Can you finish that? You can use as many words as you want <g>.

Thanks for sharing.
Lynn

What was great about this one, Wanda, was the twist at the end.

I've seen things that call themselves drabbles -- and, no, I'm not going to say where I saw them! -- that are really nothing more than a couple of disjointed paragraphs, strong on atmosphere but weak on everything else.

This one, though, hits all the right notes; it works really well. Nicely done!

Chris

Wanda,
Great job! )

That was great!

Wanda

This is great. I enjoyed it immensely.

Tricia

Hehe Nice one.
AnnaBtG.