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Nan, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I love Henderson, and I love what you're doing with him. It's fun to see his thought processes. I wonder how long it will take to click in as to who Ultrawoman really is.
Looking forward to more,
Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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Hey, just caught up with this one, so much fun! What a hoot it would be to inherit Superman's powers....a dream for all of us die-hard Superman fans....
Hope Henderson is discreet about his powers or he may blow Lois & Clark's secrets...
Will be interesting to see how you develop the story....
I'll definitely stay tuned!
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Hey Nan, great part!  Only a matter of time before the realization hits him: Ultrawoman = Lois! Looking forward to more! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Nan I love this story!  Tricia 
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Yay!! Ultrawoman is back!!! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Whee! This is fun  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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This is a fun ride. Like the others I can see Henderson easily making the connection of Lois to UltraWoman now that she has suddenly returned. One note: In WWW, the plaintiff was never really hurt by Superman, or by any falling equipment. He was faking. If you were just using that incident to show that Henderson's, like most people's. memory is a bit hazy on the details, fine, just ignore what I've said here.  Things are a little too conincidental and our duo had best come up with a good reason why UltraWoman is back or more than just Henderson will make the connection. There were a lot of witnesses to the lightning strike and the fact that Superman looks a bit like Clark Kent, and UltraWoman looks a bit like Lois Lane, who just happens to be married to Clark Kent might make things too easy. Especially if it becomes known that a certain Metropolis Police Inspector is suddenly exhibiting powers far beyond those of mortal men. Tank (who really hopes that Henderson doesn't don a cape and a pair of bright tights)
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Loving it!!! Glad they worked out that there might be a problem with Henderson. And poor Bill! What is he going to say to his wife?  Incidentally, I loved the way you had him suddenly realise that he'd covered a couple of miles in seconds.  More!!! Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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"Is Ultra Woman back?"
"Does Superman want her back?"
Clark grinned. "You bet he does! She was the sexiest woman he ever met in his life." One question, though, Nan: Why hasn't he tried flying yet?! This is such a fun story! Give us MORE, and soon. Hazel
Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.
-- Action Comics 827
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Nan, This is great, fun, fantastic! I love this story so far.. its been a wonderful look into the mind of one of my favorite auxilary characters of the show... more please as soon as possible! That last wait started to kill me! 
Marns
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Nan,
great part
playing catch up as usual
I love the story
merry
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This is a lot of fun!! And it's getting interesting, definitely looks like it's gonna take some time until Henderson can talk to Superman. I also believe that he's gonna make the connection Lois = Ultra Woman pretty soon. Waiting eagerly for the next part. Julia
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Wonderful, Nan.
I've caught up now, but love the premise, love Henderson's caution with his powers. And loved the mugging!
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Hi, Great part.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Nan, where is part 4??? )
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Ditto Wendy!!! Jose (pretty please, Nan...  )
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Thanks for the interest, everyone. I'm a little over half done with the next part. It's been a very busy week <g> but I'm trying to snatch some time when I can to write. It will be up as soon as I can manage. Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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