Christina Interesting questions!
Debbie Thanks for letting me know you're reading and enjoying.
LadyL Clark knows there isn't a problem with living 1000 miles apart. Lois doesn't though!
MM I'm glad the flow is working. It's meant to be WAFFY so I think there's allowance for a few flowery phrases etc
Virginia No Zara in this story.
Why is Clark so tense? Because he's nervous, or because Lois suddenly seems to be doing a 180 by snuggling up to him?
Because he knows that this is *it* - his one chance at happiness with the woman of his dreams. As he's already said, he's terrified of blowing it.
Laura The wedding is off? Eek! Wow--did not see that one coming
Good. I like to surprise readers occasionally.
mrsM No Lana in this story, either!
So there's an opening at the church and the reception hall... it would be a shame to waste all that preparation and not hold a wedding for someone...
Wouldn't that give the title a different meaning!
Thanks for all the lovely comments. The current hold-up is due to the fact that I wrote part 6, sent it to my BRs, tried to write part 7, and realised that part 6 completely missed the mark. After a massive re-write, I sent part 6 to the BRs again. Part 7 is still with them, too. Part 8 is written and waiting to the edited. Part 9 (yes, the story grew again!) is also written. And I've reached those wonderful words, 'The End'.
Corrina.