Ingeborg said:
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It was fun the way you used memories that would work for both Clark and Lex.
Sue S. said:
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I <...> admire how skillfully you dodged around the reveal.
I agree. You did an excellent job of picking the perfect scenes to keep up the illusion.

Lynn S. M. said
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an occasional line <...> seemed slightly "off" for Clark
Deadly Chakram said
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Now, that doesn't seem too Clark-like...
I got a tip-off that this wasn't Clark, not really because of what he said, but how he said it. However, short of telling the story in 3rd person, I really don't see how you could have gotten around that. Too Clark-like in his speech and I wouldn't believe the reveal at the end; too Lex-like and it won't sound like Clark. It must have been difficult for you to find the right balance. I think you did an excellent job!

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