Phew! My laughing hands have calmed down and now I can give feedback.
The premise and the execution were fabulous. I loved Mary Sue and all her reactions to Clark Kent (popular twentieth century icon). Her thoughts intermingled with the actual quotations kept me wondering as I was reading.
Wendy wrote:
Ooh! Just had a thought! Does this mean that Yvonne has to write her first-ever TOGOM adaptation, after swearing for so long that she never would?
I just thought that this was a TOGOM rewrite---one of the best ever.
Thanks for an enjoyable read and I vote for Mary Sue meeting Lois. I think that they would hit it off--well....
gerry
