Yvonne,
I read parts one and two in one fell swoop and was giggling my butt off near the entire time! I could not possibly pick out areas to highlight and quote as favorites, because if I did, I wuold be lifting nearly the entire fic minus a few words here and there.
Fantastic job! I would love for this Mary Sue to meet Lois too... what would go thru her mind about that... the guilt about wanting Lois' man to ravish her, the respect for a fellow strong woman, yet still having more guilt because she couldn't help but want Clark to ravish her....
