Morgana Hmmm, that's probably the reason why I was suspicious of Martha. Ooops!
It's funny that this never came up. I was trying to leave the details a little vague, but I completely misses that misconception. I knew that Martha was only told about Lois's "prisoner" status after Martha was already locked in the apartment. I had no idea that the words left that point unclear.
Hi, Mary 
I think this is the fist I've see of you for this story. I'm glad you decided to take a look.
That ending was very unexpected, but you explained it very plausibly.
I was worried that I had left way too many clues along the way and that everyone would have seen the ending from as far back as chapter 7.
So, you posted the "evil May" challenge. You know this isn't my most evil idea, (my evil story idea #2 is way, way beyond this) but what did you think of my foray into the shadows?
Thanks for the note.
Bob
