This is the best story you have written so far. So many elements were introduced and yet they fit neatly together creating a perfectly balanced story.

Sooo glad that other author rejected your plot concept. (Chuckle!) This execution of the idea was much better! thumbsup

I particularly like the idea that Lois was willing to wait ninety years for Clark as well. Now that, my friend is true loyalty!

Rock on!

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.