Hi, Michael,
Wouldn’t it be a bummer had he stumbled across an Antarctic research station?
I considered adding a scene where where Clark was searching the Antarctic for a place that was quiet enough so that he felt completely alone given his hearing.
His mom had loved being able to talk with her about him. Really talk, not just the parts that everyone else knew about.
Picture album: Baby’s first anvil rattle. Baby’s first tractor rattle. Baby’s first fire. Baby sneezed and caused a tornado.
This reminds me of parts of Smallville S1.
I have a lead on that post office call girl ring that she and I were working on.”
Mail order prostitutes?
Yes, I thought that sounded like a Cat + Lo-lo worthy story!
4. Lois’s ACC ends up damaged and she comes back as bipolar Lois. ½ the time she’s angry and cold and the other ½ the time she’s Lo-Lo. (This is very close to my original chapter 8!)
That would have made for some interesting nFic
That was one great roller-coaster ride, Bob!
It was my pleasure. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for all the wonderful and detailed feedback.
Bob
