You once again sucked me into your story and I blissfully spent the afternoon catching up on all 15 parts and the Epilogue. I have found with your stories it's better to read them all at once because the anticipation between parts is too painful to stand the wait.
(Plus, I know that I'll not want to do anything else once I've started reading... oh, look, I should have made dinner by now. Oooops.)
Beautifully done. You made us sympathetic for both Lana and Mayson, understanding where they came from without making them 100% likeable. A very hard accomplishment.
Well done. I had heard about Lana accusing Clark of fathering her child (which I thought was the accusation of this story), so when Mayson was found dead you really caused my