Wow! Totally brilliant story! What can I say that others haven't already said?
However, I have one question? Since this is a time displaced pairing, what about earlier Clark?
It is 1988 in Lois' world. Nightfall arrives in 1994. Clark arrives in 2001. What happens when 2001 Clark arrives?
I suppose they could adopt him and raise him, but that would lead to a really strange Oedipus loop thingy.
Sorry, but my mind just will not let that go.
James